Interesting conversation with Remus, I wonder how Severus will feel when he finds out. Thank you for updating your great story
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER. IT'S GREAT!!
Loving this story a lot, but the trans representation just rocketed this to a whole new level.
Title: Suspicion
| 27 Jul 2021 2:45 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow a very long chapter, thank you so much. I loved your take on the wizard world, I’ve always seen it as a Victorian world but your more modern accepting one is very good.
I loved this amazingly long and packed chapter. How cool that magic can help Sammy, and others like her, to be comfortable in their own skin. The fight scene was riveting, and Snape’s response was touching. Thanks so much for this great update to your wonderful story, and looking forward to reading on.
Too much to unpack here for a detailed review. The Sammy side story was interesting, too bad we don't have magic to show everyone for real! I am not transgender but it would make life so much easier. Looking forward to the next chapter! I swear I watch the scroll bar as I read to see how much further I have to go before I am at the end of the chapter. lol And yet am STILL disappointed when it ends!
Title: Deceptions
| 15 Jun 2021 7:28 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A lovely long chapter thank you. Harry certainly gets into terrible messes but always gets himself out of them. Severus can read a lot into Harry’s need to apologise for being ill in his quarters. Love Minerva’s protective instincts, but Dumbledore is a manipulative menace. Thank you for updating
Albus seems to be slow in realizing that people have independent thought and actions. He can TRY to manipulate things, but it won't always work! The last conversation between Harry and Severus was awesome. He's trying so hard to be a good father and Harry is finding out that there are drawbacks to having one.
I really like this chapter! Espero que sigas pronto, está súper bien escrito.
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