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Title: Weighing One's Worth 07 Sep 2022 12:18 am
Reviewer: Sirena (Signed) [Report This]
    OK... I wanted to stop reading now and save it and I am sure now there will be a hole - when I click next it is not loading (empty space), and when I choose from list "The Almost Apologies" it skip to "the guest of MM". Knowing my luck you won't be around, but if so could you try to fix it? Thanks...
Title: Weighing One's Worth 07 Sep 2022 12:13 am
Reviewer: Sirena (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't really get what Severous is aiming at (and I don't get what set him of sometimes too, 5 Harry on that). Is he wanting to throw Harry to Dumbledore? Because I got bit pissed of when he told Harry to "not call it that" when Harry named shop home (and I want to be wrong about it :/) and I am pretty sure Sev refered same way to it while taking Harry back after his run away. So either he is not managing his own feelings or planing to get rid of kid... or both really. (drama sigh)
    Overall concept of the story is interesting, I have to admit I needed to go back to main page to check summary about magic thing, cos I wasn't sure is it there or not, some things looked like they could have been magical~ I am not really knowledge in history, but I am buying what you are selling here.

    PS.
    There is no chapter 11? I am ending my reading for now, but I hope there is no hole there since there are two 12? Cos I am coming back here for more!
Title: The Guests of Malfoy Manor 03 Jun 2021 6:43 pm
Reviewer: ARim (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a delightful tale.
    You have a large chunk of text missing between Harry and Mr. Patel in the kitchen and, then, a scene break, making it difficult to understand. Where did Snape come from?
    What are they talking about? Explanation, please.
    Where did Harry and Mr. Patel disappear?
    Start of quote:
    "What?"
    " I don't know how else to explain it to you, Prof. Snape",said Prof. Patel.
    End of quote.
    It is a lovely and disjointed scene,
    clad in a fog from the days of Charles Dickens.
    Reading on.
    Thank you for keeping on writing.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely comment, first of all. I truly appreciate it :) And I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story! Second, thank you for pointing that out. I've meant to put a line break to show that it's a new scene where Prof. Snape came to pick Harry up, but I must have forgotten. Its fixed now though ^^ Please feel free to share any other questions and comments!
Title: Lie Among the Snakes 31 May 2021 8:02 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for updating. I love their interaction it is always fraught with angst.

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you're still on board with the story! ^^
Title: Strange, Silent, Slytherin 12 Mar 2021 8:32 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Love Harry being in Slytherin. He and Draco make a good pair. Thank you for updating

    Author's Response: Hate that I wasn't able to respond earlier. Thank you for your comment, and for reading ^^
Title: You're Worth Some Afterall! 05 Feb 2021 8:26 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you, I’m so glad he is in Slytherin I think he will do better with Severus

    Author's Response: I do too! I'm glad you enjoyed the read <3
Title: The Monster In Greenhouse Three 23 Jan 2021 2:15 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very heartfelt, thank you a brooding chapter.
    I’m wondering why the story says the end after each chapter when obviously it hasn’t ended.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. And thank you for pointing that out! I've fixed it, though I'm not sure how that came to be either. Have a great week :)
Title: Luna's Ink Stains 18 Jan 2021 8:50 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    So glad Luna is in the story I love her. Thank you an interesting, and informative chapter. I don’t see Harry being a good fit for Ravenclaw

    Author's Response: I do too! She's such a fun character to both write and read :). Quite agreed! He will have to spend more time in other houses to find out where. Thank you for the comment~
Title: Hogwarts, the New and Diffrent (pt 2) 08 Jan 2021 9:13 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter, I almost wish Harry was staying in Hufflepuff. Thank you for updating hen you are so busy

    Author's Response: So do I XD But for the sake of the story, I've figured out where to put him. Can't say it though. No problem :) Thank you for reading and commenting.
Title: Hogwarts, the New and Diffrent (pt 1) 31 Dec 2020 11:30 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an entertaining chapter I like how you are blending cannon and your au world

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and commenting, friend.

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