Reviews For Of Herbs, Crowns and Soot
Overall concept of the story is interesting, I have to admit I needed to go back to main page to check summary about magic thing, cos I wasn't sure is it there or not, some things looked like they could have been magical~ I am not really knowledge in history, but I am buying what you are selling here.
There is no chapter 11? I am ending my reading for now, but I hope there is no hole there since there are two 12? Cos I am coming back here for more!
You have a large chunk of text missing between Harry and Mr. Patel in the kitchen and, then, a scene break, making it difficult to understand. Where did Snape come from?
What are they talking about? Explanation, please.
Where did Harry and Mr. Patel disappear?
Start of quote:
" I don't know how else to explain it to you, Prof. Snape",said Prof. Patel.
End of quote.
It is a lovely and disjointed scene,
clad in a fog from the days of Charles Dickens.
Thank you for keeping on writing.
Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely comment, first of all. I truly appreciate it :) And I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story! Second, thank you for pointing that out. I've meant to put a line break to show that it's a new scene where Prof. Snape came to pick Harry up, but I must have forgotten. Its fixed now though ^^ Please feel free to share any other questions and comments!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you're still on board with the story! ^^
Author's Response: Hate that I wasn't able to respond earlier. Thank you for your comment, and for reading ^^
Author's Response: I do too! I'm glad you enjoyed the read <3
I’m wondering why the story says the end after each chapter when obviously it hasn’t ended.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. And thank you for pointing that out! I've fixed it, though I'm not sure how that came to be either. Have a great week :)
Author's Response: I do too! She's such a fun character to both write and read :). Quite agreed! He will have to spend more time in other houses to find out where. Thank you for the comment~
Author's Response: So do I XD But for the sake of the story, I've figured out where to put him. Can't say it though. No problem :) Thank you for reading and commenting.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and commenting, friend.
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