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Reviews For Of Herbs, Crowns and Soot
You have a large chunk of text missing between Harry and Mr. Patel in the kitchen and, then, a scene break, making it difficult to understand. Where did Snape come from? What are they talking about? Explanation, please. Where did Harry and Mr. Patel disappear? Start of quote: "What?" " I don't know how else to explain it to you, Prof. Snape",said Prof. Patel. End of quote. It is a lovely and disjointed scene, clad in a fog from the days of Charles Dickens. Reading on. Thank you for keeping on writing. Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely comment, first of all. I truly appreciate it :) And I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story! Second, thank you for pointing that out. I've meant to put a line break to show that it's a new scene where Prof. Snape came to pick Harry up, but I must have forgotten. Its fixed now though ^^ Please feel free to share any other questions and comments!
Author's Response: Not at all! Thank you for reading and taking the time to review this little work of mine ^^ |
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