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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: The Guests of Malfoy Manor 03 Jun 2021 6:43 pm
Reviewer: ARim (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a delightful tale.
    You have a large chunk of text missing between Harry and Mr. Patel in the kitchen and, then, a scene break, making it difficult to understand. Where did Snape come from?
    What are they talking about? Explanation, please.
    Where did Harry and Mr. Patel disappear?
    Start of quote:
    "What?"
    " I don't know how else to explain it to you, Prof. Snape",said Prof. Patel.
    End of quote.
    It is a lovely and disjointed scene,
    clad in a fog from the days of Charles Dickens.
    Reading on.
    Thank you for keeping on writing.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely comment, first of all. I truly appreciate it :) And I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story! Second, thank you for pointing that out. I've meant to put a line break to show that it's a new scene where Prof. Snape came to pick Harry up, but I must have forgotten. Its fixed now though ^^ Please feel free to share any other questions and comments!
Title: The Guests of Malfoy Manor 17 Oct 2020 4:22 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an excellent chapter

    Author's Response: Not at all! Thank you for reading and taking the time to review this little work of mine ^^

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