Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Foretold in the Paint 25 Dec 2020 7:24 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an interesting chapter I loved how you used Trelawney as an art teacher

    Author's Response: Thank you friend. ^^ I'm thankful the concept was agreeable to you. Hope to see you soon. ^^
Title: The Adults Take a Tumble 17 Dec 2020 8:09 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you it’s good t be at Hogwarts. I love your idea of the sorting and what they have planned for Harry

    Author's Response: It really is. I'm glad you've enjoyed it. I was very nervous when writing it, as I thought it would be a bit too much. Thank you for reading and commenting dear friend :)
Title: The Way of August 30 14 Dec 2020 7:51 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an excellent take on book 3 and the train ride

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment :)
Title: The First Step, as Paved by Dumbledore 05 Dec 2020 11:11 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh poor Harry, very good chapter with a lot of angst, thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. :) I hope you have a great week!
Title: History, as Told by Dumbledore 27 Nov 2020 8:21 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good reactions for Harry to have, he needs to deal with the emotions and hurt. Thank you an excellent chapter

    Author's Response: I'm glad you think so, as at first I was a bit sceptical of writing it. Thank you for reading and commenting. ^^
Title: It's Pronounced Dumbledore 27 Nov 2020 5:32 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the Malloy Manor part but so pleased to be back in the main centre of the story thank you.

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. And so am I. Can't wait to share the rest of the chapters. ^^
Title: The Sick Irony 12 Nov 2020 9:45 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter thank you so much

    Author's Response: b25;b25;
Title: The Ferret Child 03 Nov 2020 9:31 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very good chapter

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting!
Title: Strangers Don't Make Good Guests 27 Oct 2020 6:30 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Love how you describe Malloy Manor and their occupants. You created a very good air of menace and threat with the journey and their arrival, rather like a gothic novel, thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you for the comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I was very sceptical writing this chapter, and had a lot of doubts, but I'm overjoyed with the positive feedback. Thank you for reading. :)
Title: Strangers Don't Make Good Guests 25 Oct 2020 9:07 pm
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    An interesting chapter. I laughed at your slow burn adoption comment earlier. As an adoptive parent in real life of a four year old, I can attest that it took 6 months before we got a real hug. Yes our daughter put her arms around us like she knew was expected but it wasn’t like she felt cared about. And of course we were no Snape. Like any relationship between strangers, an older child adoption takes trust and time before love can bloom. Those stories where Harry immediately accepts Severus as his father, they are unrealistic though sometimes fun. This story is unique and interesting.

    Author's Response: I'm so glad I was able to get you to laugh ^^. Also, I am so lucky to know that this story reached so many people. Wishing nothing but the best for you and your family. I completly agree. I do enjoy fics where they immedietly click, but I don't think that would be the case for this story. I belive there are obstacles they need ot cross before they can see the real side of one another, the one's not hidden behind layers of emotions they're refusing to let go. Thank you so much for your comment! Hope you like the the chapters to come!! :)

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