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Title: Quivering boy, tell me your sorrows 07 Aug 2020 1:28 pm
Reviewer: jules3677 (Signed) [Report This]
    Definitely got the mood of the story in your writing. Certainly wonder how Dumbledore will react when he is informed of Harry's abusive history by the hands of the family who he left him on the doorstep of.

    Author's Response:

    Well, chapter 2 is up and now I can safely answer this: not happily. I briefly considered doing the classic Evil Dumbles where he believes that suffering will give one character and create a hero out of a child, but it made more sense for him, as leader of the light and headmaster of a school, to react with anger and horror instead to the news of a child under their care being abused.

Title: Quivering boy, tell me your sorrows 07 Aug 2020 2:39 am
Reviewer: Emmygirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this first chapter. I hope you continue with it! I think you have a very interesting story idea ;)

    Author's Response: Thank you! I was very nervous about writing and posting this, given that I haven't written anything for Harry Potter before. But so far, I've received good reviews, which is comforting.
Title: Quivering boy, tell me your sorrows 06 Aug 2020 6:44 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good first chapter thank you for posting your wonderful story

    Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate that a lot :D
Title: Quivering boy, tell me your sorrows 06 Aug 2020 2:52 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry!

    Author's Response: Yeah, I do feel bad for writing Harry whump, but at the same time, I do love stories centered around a character who is in pain but is helped and they go on a journey of growth and development until they reach a place where they are no longer in pain or alone. I love those kinds of story arcs. But rest assured, this story will not be ending on some sudden tragedy. Harry will make it to the end. And his suffering will be worth it. Or as worth it as far as suffering goes. He'll get the happy ending he deserves.
Title: Quivering boy, tell me your sorrows 04 Aug 2020 3:45 pm
Reviewer: Ms_Prongs (Signed) [Report This]
    You needn't be nervous about posting this. My only complaint is there isn't more of it already for me to inhale.

    I like to binge my stories, you see...
    But I'm content with reading this as each chapter comes out, just please don't let it die - this has the potential to be an AMAZING story, from what this first chapter has shown!

    Author's Response:

    I also like to binge my stories, and that's usually the reason I usually sort by completed stories. And probably entirely the reason that I have insomni jk. 

    Thank you, that means a lot :D It's very nice to see how well people received the first chapter and reacted to the premise of the story. It does mean a lot and it helps me actually have the drive to write a story that I've never felt confident enough to properly put on paper.

Title: Quivering boy, tell me your sorrows 04 Aug 2020 4:56 am
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    A sweet beginning.

    Author's Response: Thank you :3
Title: Quivering boy, tell me your sorrows 04 Aug 2020 2:57 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    What a good start. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go next.

    I liked McGonnigal's reaction to the sorting, and that Hermione is with Harry in Slytherin. That should be an interesting twist in itself. 😆

    Author's Response: Hermione being a Slytherin will be unstoppable. I did consider adding Ron there, but I thought it would be more interesting to play on their dynamic if they were separated. He will be added to the fray, though, in later chapters. And thank you!

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