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Title: Chapter 1: Prologue 12 Feb 2024 10:46 pm
Reviewer: Nemo (Signed) [Report This]

    Hey :) 

    Often the Story of the Moment box has brought me back to some good stories I read some time ago. Yours isn't an exception. I remember I liked the story the first time because it had some really clever and fresh ideas in it and for the feeling it created during reading. Well you didn't disappoint the second time around. 

    Thanks for a great start to your fic! I liked James going to Severus for help them becoming partners. 

    One thing though: if Harry was born in July 1980 wouldn't he be four years old in May 1985? I'm really not good at maths though ;)

Title: Chapter 9: The Internship 09 Nov 2020 10:36 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear I think the summer is going to get worse for all concerned. Thank you a great chapter
Title: Chapter 8: The Missive 03 Nov 2020 8:58 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic chapter, the pace is really hotting up. Interesting that Dumbledore still believes Harry is the one in the prophecy, but does Voldemort believe it?
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue 31 Oct 2020 6:46 pm
Reviewer: ChemPrincess (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start.
Title: Chapter 7: The Baking Frenzy 28 Oct 2020 6:49 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good intriguing titbits here thank you. I wonder what the other message said to Severus and if Lily knows Mrs Figg is a member of the order! Wheels within wheels!
Title: Chapter 6: The Gala Situation 26 Oct 2020 7:10 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much. A lot in this chapter to think about I wonder just what James’ role in the war actually was as there is obviously a lot more that Severus could tell them. I’m so glad Tonk’s is on the side of the order still.
    Looking forward to more of the story
Title: Chapter 4: Brimstone Nova 21 Oct 2020 7:29 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Sorry, didn't intend to post before. Why does everyone seem so passive about the situation, is Dumbledore headmaster in name only, why don't the Muggleborns just turn their back on the magical world and do great things in the Muggle world. I'm sure answers will be forthcoming.
Title: Chapter 4: Brimstone Nova 21 Oct 2020 7:23 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Can't quite get my head around this AU yet, so many questions,
Title: Chapter 5: The Missing 20 Oct 2020 9:38 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I was puzzled by Lily’s attitude to the horrible situation she is in. From the books she comes across as a very fiery character and here she is the passive woman at home. I think you are bringing her out so well here, I’m looking forward to the gala. Thank you for an absorbing story
Title: Chapter 3: A Whole Different World 20 Oct 2020 6:57 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an excellent chapter

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