This was a great story. I wish I had found this as you were writting it. Thank you so much for sharing your talent.
Tear jerker of an ending to this chapter. And damn Dumbledore. The way he is portrayed is fantastic. I've mentioned it before and I will again. You utilize character flaws withou resorting to bashing and there is no mockery of the Dark Lord or his name. You have written an amazing story.
A good wind down chapter after the intensity of the previous ones. Again the little acknowledgements of Harry's physical age have been really well done.
Nice! I really do enjoy the Severus, Remus an Sirius interaction parts. They've set a lot of their history to the side for Harry.
Oh boy. Things are going to get much worse before they get better.
Yup, I do not like Dumbledore. You have swayed me to that position. Even better you did it without bashing. This is definitely one of my favorite things about the story. You don't bash the characters. You use their flaws but you don't bash. And I love Harry's passive aggresive tactics.
Another fine chapter. So far Dumbledore has been mentioned but has not shared a scene with Harry. I'm looking forward to that. The evolution of the relationship between Severus, Sirius and Remus has been very well done.
Definitely leaning towards Harry being physically and emotionally six. A bit sad about Harry and Padfoot but a very realistic reaction. Harry is six and Padfoot would have as tall or possibly taller than Harry. Pad foot would have been easily 2 or 3 times Harry's weight. And Ripper had bit Harry previously. Yeah, no wonder Harry was scared.
You deserve far more reviews. I've recently started poking around potions and snitches. The only reward authors receive for their work is a review. The length and quality of the story is an investment of your time. And I greatly appreciate your time and talent in writting thiz story. Thank you.
A lot of explanations in this chapter. And Harry reflecting on the Sorting Hats first choice of Slytherin. Harry getting swaddled was cute. I like that Snape has discovered that stroking Harry's nose calms him. It's a nice touch. Again its these little things that add so much tonyour story.
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