I love the twist of how the flat is protected and by whom. I really like this protective Snape.
Lovely chapter. Thank you. I appreciated the explanations from Snape.
Thanks for the heavy, but nicely done chapter. I appreciate Snape’s care of Harry after he dissassociated.
It looks like I’m destined to be perpetually annoyed with Sirius. He really is clueless with regards to Harry’s feelings.
I’m so curious what the missing piece of the puzzle with Avery is, and why that necklace was hidden. Thanks for an intriguing story so far.
Sirius is acting like….Sirius. Sigh. This is a terrible idea. I hope that Snape comes through for Harry.
I love how Harry climbed onto Snape’s lap under his cloak. That was a deeply touching scene. I only wish that he had gone with Snape, instead of being redirected by Sirius - who is not behaving well!
Yes, I think I caught it! It was when Snape parable his hand over Harry’s shoulder while Harry slept on top of his bed. Very subtle, but sweet.
That was a really sweet chapter. I love how Severus is showing Harry comfort in small and believable ways. Harry’s emotions and fears around others were realistically tumultuous and well-described. I always appreciate when Snape comes off the victor when going toe-to-toe with Sirius!
This was a wonderfully angsty chapter. You’ve captured Harry’s younger body and physical reactions so well, even as you’ve skillfully retained his teenage reasoning capabilities. Thanks so much for this great chapter.
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