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Title: Malfoys' Interlude: Azkaban Prison 05 Aug 2021 9:45 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting take on wizard ink culture. I don’t think I’ve read a story with a day to day account of Azkaban, at least one without dementors around, thank you
Title: The Unspeakable 28 Jul 2021 8:33 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for updating. That was a real curved ball the conversation with Christopher, I hope he doesn’t take it any further but I’m sure it’s significant. I’m glad someone in Harry’s past muggle life questioned his upbringing.
Title: The Unspeakable 23 Jul 2021 8:26 pm
Reviewer: Reticulated (Signed) [Report This]
    When you didn't update last week I was kind of afraid...
    Nice scene with Christopher and his precision (and vagueness) about what he could say or not. I was picturing these silent wizards in black with great, hush-hush powers, but you made him seem so normal.
    Looking forward!

    Author's Response:

    Glad to hear you're enjoying the story! I try to update weekly, but as the plot is getting more involved that may slow down a bit. I'm terrified I'm going to leave a key piece out on accident making the whole thing unsolvable, so I've been taking extra time to comb through the details/timeline with the plot.

     

    Thanks for the feedback on Christopher! There was so little canon information to work from it was fun and a bit scary to get to make my own version of the Unspeakables. 

Title: What Now? 12 Jul 2021 10:48 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for updating. I’m getting more and more irritated with Dumbledore here. He is being too “hands off” with his former spies and doesn’t even seem to care about Harry. Is this part of the plot line? Poor Draco and Hermione what a mess. I love your Minerva she is so strong on justice for everything but can bend the rules if necessary.

    Author's Response:

    Dumbledore is definitely a more passive character in this fic because with Voldemort gone, the Order doesn't really have any role in the plot going on. That being said, it's ironic you mention it now because his part in this chapter was meant to sound evasive and does relate to the plot, so it's a little of both. 

Title: The Halloween Ball 26 Jun 2021 7:06 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear poor Draco. Very good chapter of highs and lows thank you
Title: Foundations 22 Jun 2021 7:33 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful scene at the end! I do love your description of meetings between Lucius and Severus. They are so clever and well constructed. Thank you so much
Title: The Mask 16 Jun 2021 8:56 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you, a very packed chapter. I love the interactions of the group, the mystery deepens and is becoming more convoluted. I’m wondering if the article in the newspaper is important.
Title: The Bet 15 Jun 2021 7:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear I am so sorry! I read most of this and was interrupted and forgot to go back and complete the chapter and review. I was very confused when I tried to read the next chapter!
    I’m not surprised that Severus snapped at the lab but such a shame if he can’t work there, I think it is keeping him sane in the insane world he is living in.
    I’m interested in when a muggle can learn about magic if in a relationship with one. Obviously Severus’s father had found out at sometime, but when. I wonder if this is a thread you are going to peruse.
    Thank you a great chapter
Title: The Mask 11 Jun 2021 4:16 am
Reviewer: Reticulated (Signed) [Report This]
    Also wanted to tell you that although I don't get to review often (my bad), I read and appreciate every single chapter that you publish. Keep them coming!
Title: The Mask 11 Jun 2021 4:12 am
Reviewer: Reticulated (Signed) [Report This]
    Had to stop by once more and tell you how much I'm enjoying the sequel! I also love the medical aspect, keep that rolling...
    I really feel bad for Snape, with all the troublesome things constantly falling on his head - didn't he break yet, the poor thing?

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