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Title: Hala Khatib 28 Feb 2021 9:01 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you, a great chapter and lovely to see the Griffindor boys rallying around Harry
Title: The Ravenclaws 28 Feb 2021 8:17 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very thoughtful chapter, I must say when I read Pof A my thought was I wouldn’t want my phobia to be aired to everyone. I love Draco as a kitten, and being caught naked was good. Thank you again for your wonderful universe
Title: Magical Core 18 Feb 2021 5:02 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Made a mistake and read and reviewed the next chapter first! I wondered why it didn’t quite flow!
    I love having the two of them in the dungeons together even when it is horrible for Harry.
Title: Malfoys' Interlude: The Solicitor 17 Feb 2021 11:11 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the confrontation with Crookshanks. Very ominous in the last sentence I hope nothing is going to happen to Draco
Title: The Aurors' Visit 13 Feb 2021 5:16 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter, I loved the defence class with the girls besting the boys, “girl power” go go go.
Title: The Daily Prophet 08 Feb 2021 9:24 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    That is so sweet of Dudley! Thank you for updating and an interesting chapter
Title: Malfoys' Interlude: To Be a Slytherin 06 Feb 2021 8:36 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter, I find these two very interesting. Your OC character sounds interesting as well, but I can’t wait for Harry and Draco to talk!
Title: On The Hogwarts Express 01 Feb 2021 7:25 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you, a very interesting chapter. It struck me that I’m not sure if Harry Severus and the Weasleys know why Draco took Harry because of Hermione. If they do then Ron’s behaviour towards Draco is inexcusable.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your reviews! You're right that Ron and the Weasley's don't know about Hermione's life getting threatened. Harry and Snape know, but they haven't discussed that aspect of the Malfoy Manor situation. It's definitely something I should add to in an upcoming chapter and Ron's reaction to hearing about it.
Title: The Teally-Frone 29 Jan 2021 9:22 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, lovely to see Severus enjoying himself
Title: Malfoys' Interlude: Lunch with Lucius 26 Jan 2021 3:17 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a wonderful chapter with a healing agenda at its heart

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