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Title: Right Here in My Arms 17 Nov 2020 2:32 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwwww this is too cute! it's always nice to hear Severus sing. I'm glad he's so happy too.

    But who was Severus talking to? When he was hiding... it says his husband? But who is that and why weren't they seen by the rest of the Order? I wish there had been more details about that.

    Also one typo: Lily gratefully smiled and passed her son to Severus. "Thank you. He's been really fussy since we got here and won't start crying."

    Should be stop crying not start crying. :)

    Good start so far!

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