What a great start.
I’m hooked.
| Title: Chapter 12: Fool Me Once
| 21 Jun 2021 1:21 pm
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Lovely little scene at the end. Severus is really trying with Harry and understands what he needs in the way of structure and rules, I love how their relationship is progressing. Thank you for updating your wonderful story.
| Title: Chapter 11: The Apprentice Doesn’t Fall Far from the Tree
| 20 Jun 2021 9:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter, Harry was out of order at the end which was a shame but I loved their lunch scene. Thank you for updating this story, I must have missed it on the recent page as I nave just found it but, I can now read two chapters and that is a bonus.
| Title: Chapter 10: Cat and Mouse
| 17 Jan 2021 9:31 pm
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I loved how you described how Severus felt when dressing in his formal robes. I always felt that the description of his billowing robes and formality were his way of dealing with the world that disliked him and his insecurities about his role. You have shown this so well, thank you for an excellent story
| Title: Chapter 9: The Holidays Begin
| 17 Jan 2021 9:11 pm
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Thank you a lovely chapter. I’m so glad that they are not going mushy as I think the way you are portraying the characters is much more realistic
| Title: Chapter 8: Snape’s Reflections
| 17 Jan 2021 6:20 pm
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Oh dear I smell trouble ahead. Thank you an interesting chapter and I liked your explanation of why he became a death eater and his apprenticeship
| Title: Chapter 7: Breakdown
| 17 Jan 2021 5:55 pm
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Thank you I’m so pleased that someone is asking questions about why he ran away although the way it came out was a little dramatic!
| Title: Chapter 6: Welcome to the Dungeons
| 17 Jan 2021 5:34 pm
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Very good chapter I like your characterisation
| Title: Chapter 5: Breaking the News
| 17 Jan 2021 5:25 pm
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An excellent chapter thank you. I’m amazed that not one adult has questioned why Harry ran away and what he is frightened of
| Title: Chapter 4: Snape Comes to Terms
| 16 Jan 2021 9:51 pm
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A very interesting chapter, I wonder how Minerva will react. Thank you
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