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Title: Chapter 6 29 Jun 2023 8:21 pm
Reviewer: Roosterroo (Signed) [Report This]
    This is my third time reading this story and I am still obsessed
Title: Chapter 6 20 Aug 2021 4:50 am
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoys (Signed) [Report This]
    Definitely!
    So good to see that Severus isn't stone-hearted about the reported abuse! I've read stories (by Snape haters) where all Sev felt was glee that the child of his childhood nemesis had been abused! But I don't think even canon-Snape would have been that cold and morally bereft!

    And the fact that he's already acknowledging that Harry's *his* child is an excellent sign!

    But you've got me chewing my nails: Sev is a spy and bringing Harry into his home could be a "death sentence" for both of them and I absolutely *know* that Stumblingbore won't give a crap! He'll probably advise Sev to send Harry back to Durskaban; he won't want to give up his *weapon*!

    I know, you probably don't despise AD as much as I do, but even "good!Dumbasadoor" makes me watch his hand for "the knife"!

    Great chapter!
    Tks!
    MelJ
Title: Chapter 6 29 Jan 2021 6:08 am
Reviewer: magickorange (Signed) [Report This]
    Loving it!! Can’t wait for the next chapter
Title: Chapter 6 27 Jan 2021 10:18 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I love it when the magical folk have to somehow work the muggle world out thank you
Title: Chapter 6 26 Jan 2021 5:20 am
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes I enjoyed it very much too! I would think that social services would wonder why Snape didn’t have custody to begin with. It would be odd for a caring father to give up custody without a good reason.
Title: Chapter 6 25 Jan 2021 5:30 am
Reviewer: Ms_Prongs (Signed) [Report This]
    I wish I could tell you how much I enjoyed this chapter but words just simply won't do it justice.

    I'm giddy to find out what happens when Severus and Harry meet. And I SO want him to lay in to Dumbledore, and I want the Dursely's to get their comeuppance, and...and and and, so MANY THINGS I want to see happen!

    I love this story - I love the whole premise. I had the same seizures he had when I was a baby, by the way. They treated me with Valproic acid.

    I could ramble on about that for even longer, but I just - I love the detail you go in to about everything. Especially with the way magic is reacting to the muggle hospital - when not warded/prepared properly.

    I've found myself wondering a bit about muggle hospitals and wizards, like what if there were a whole slew of muggle doctors who were aware of magic and were able to work on treating them, or every time they found a magic child they were able to follow protocols or something.

    Anyways, I'm rambling. Sorry.

    I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Title: Chapter 6 25 Jan 2021 5:30 am
Reviewer: Ms_Prongs (Signed) [Report This]
    I wish I could tell you how much I enjoyed this chapter but words just simply won't do it justice.

    I'm giddy to find out what happens when Severus and Harry meet. And I SO want him to lay in to Dumbledore, and I want the Dursely's to get their comeuppance, and...and and and, so MANY THINGS I want to see happen!

    I love this story - I love the whole premise. I had the same seizures he had when I was a baby, by the way. They treated me with Valproic acid.

    I could ramble on about that for even longer, but I just - I love the detail you go in to about everything. Especially with the way magic is reacting to the muggle hospital - when not warded/prepared properly.

    I've found myself wondering a bit about muggle hospitals and wizards, like what if there were a whole slew of muggle doctors who were aware of magic and were able to work on treating them, or every time they found a magic child they were able to follow protocols or something.

    Anyways, I'm rambling. Sorry.

    I can't wait for the next chapter!!

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