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Title: Chapter 20 20 Aug 2021 6:20 pm
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoys (Signed) [Report This]
    So, are you going with "Hermione bashing"? Her refusal to look at her own behavior during the encounter with Elias AND lack of empathy --shown by her *failure* to impart the particulars of "Elias'" extremely ill appearance, his uncontrollable spasms, and his stutter--towards the obviously *very* ill kid are very telling and send up a large red flag that she is behaving extremely OOC with the exception of the original train ride. By 5th year, Hermione had seriously toned down her bossy/snooty behavior.
    I've got a bad feeling...

    Another thing that's got me mad is Remus running to the MOB to tell him of his first meeting with Elias and Severus! And don't think I didn't catch Dumblefu**'s dismissive attitude; the insufferable old prick!!
    Why would Remus think it was acceptable to breach his obligation relationship to his PRIVATE student?!
    Now, I don't trust Remus either!

    MelJ
Title: Chapter 20 17 Apr 2021 4:14 pm
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story so much I may just have to go back to the beginning and keep repeating until you add more chapters!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it as much as I'm enjoying writing it!
Title: Chapter 20 12 Apr 2021 3:16 am
Reviewer: Shell (Signed) [Report This]
    Back to Hogwarts!! I can’t wait to see what happens next.

    Author's Response: Pure, unadulterated nonsense is what happens next! No, not really, but this is certainly going to be a year to remember.
Title: Chapter 20 11 Apr 2021 1:00 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. Thanks so much.

    Author's Response: :D
Title: Chapter 20 10 Apr 2021 10:05 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter as always. I’m sad that Hermione is not likely to be friendly to Elias, but if she sees him in a seizure I’m sure she will help. Elias will have to find friends outside of Gryffindor this year. Thank you so much for continuing your story

    Author's Response: Always a pleasure! I'm little behind on the writing side of things, but I'm trying to get caught up and not put myself into writers block! Updates may slow, but I'm still roughly 60 pages ahead of what I've posted, so know that there's plenty more to come!

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