Great chapter! I enjoyed seeing Snape get so protective over Elias. I’m playing catch up on some chapters here, so looking forward to reading on!
Aww, breakin' my heart again!
Poor kid!
Sev needs to sneak out one weekend and take Elias to get the prophecy NOW! No dawdling, no procrastination; now! Then they'll be able to get an idea of what's going through Dumbasfu**'s head!
Thanks!
MelJ
Poor Harry :(
Author's Response: I know... poor Harry... Hope something bad doesn't happen to him...........
| Title: Chapter 29
| 05 Jun 2021 7:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I suppose, given Harry’s reckless behaviour in the past, there was bound to be a transgression along the line. I do like Draco and Harry together I think they are good for each other.
Severus says that Dumbledore does not know the whole prophecy. Is this Severus’s assumption or is this part of your story?
Thank you for a great chapter and story.
Author's Response: My apologies for the confusion on this one. I missed that little bit when I was going through and making sure things made sense. Voldie doesn't know the entire prophecy, Dumbledore does.
| Title: Chapter 29
| 03 Jun 2021 11:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Couldn't believe it when snape took 75 whole points but then I thought about it and yep dad!snape would definitely do that for endangering his son. Poor draco, just wanted to give Elias a little bit of fun and now he's lost his broom, has detention, and has cost slytherin more points than they've ever lost from snape. Hopefully slytherin isn't too angry with draco or Elias about it. They'll just have to kick butt in the next quidditch matches is all. Surprised severus didnt quarantine Elias to their quarters lol, I was exp rid acting him to go nuclear like nope from now on you can have meals, tutoring and everything else in our quarters period. Glad he didnt of course. It's interesting to see, it's just hitting harry that "phuck, this is real. This is my life now. And screw the BWL lock. This one isn't going to be fixed by a night in the medical ward and some skelegrow or a Phoenix tear..." I think it's really important that he has this time to come to that realization though. I mean, he's been living like one day he wont need to be Elias again I think but the reality is he will never be Harry Potter again
Author's Response: I'm really glad someone is sitting here analyzing these chapters like this.... It makes me really really excited for posting the next few chapters because I often wonder if people are catching some of the clues I've been putting in about how things are going to go down in the rest of the story.
Thank you, thank you ;)
Author's Response: *bows* No, thank YOU!
“Yes, Mr. Snape,” Severus said with a malicious grin. “You are grounded. And you will be serving detention with Mr. Malfoy as well.”
Ouch. Why does it sound like Snape wishes he could also still take points from Gryffindor for Elias? LOL
And yay for 2 chapters next week! That's the kind of thank you gift I love from authors.
Author's Response: Oh, I'm sure he would have removed all of Gryffindor's points if he could have. Glad you're enjoying!!!
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