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Title: Chapter 33 14 Oct 2022 1:36 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    It was only a matter of time before she figured it out, but I’m afraid with more people suspecting, it will become harder to protect Elias.
Title: Chapter 33 21 Aug 2021 4:12 am
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoys (Signed) [Report This]
    Good, Hermione, think it through; don't go rushing off half-cocked again. Lupin's not a bad choice to go to IF he's not fully still in the MOB's knickers!

    Aw, poor baby!! My heart feels for him!

    They should have put him back into the healing sleep before taking him to the Hospital Wing, then he'd have slept through the portkey!

    Well, maybe if he sees that the portkey didn't take him anyplace bad, it'll help the residual trauma. I hope!

    Tks!
    MelJ
Title: Chapter 33 22 Jun 2021 8:48 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    At last Severus has worked out the connection between Elias and Voldemort. I’m worried about Hermione being the one to confirm who Elias is. In this universe she doesn’t have her usual judgement, and she always wants to go to adults and it might be disastrous if she goes to Minerva or Dumbledore. Let’s hope Lupin at least asks questions, or Tonks comes through with information that will stop Lupin going to Dumbledore.
Title: Chapter 33 19 Jun 2021 9:46 am
Reviewer: magickorange (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh nooooooo hermionie is gunna spill the beans to Remus 😂😂 damn i feel so bad for hermionie thinking he’s dying

    Author's Response: heheheheheh
Title: Chapter 33 17 Jun 2021 8:12 pm
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Idiot! She's going to go rambling to Lupin who'll figure it out and Merlin knows he'll go to Dumbledore. Poor Elias, I know he's afraid of port keys,but it's the safest way to travel in his condition and I don't see that changing. Apparation had him laid up sick when snape took him room the hospital, and even as harry he couldn't exit a floo without tripping. I hope the doctors paperwork holds up; snape really needs to figure something out about the old lightning bolt scar if ever Elias can be really safe. Great chapter as usual

    Author's Response: I know it’s not really well explained, but the old lightning bolt isn’t visible, just the tail ends of the bolt itself. He is, however, bleeding under the skin and is bruising in that area. Glad you’re enjoying! Much more to come!
Title: Chapter 33 17 Jun 2021 6:10 pm
Reviewer: Shellie (Signed) [Report This]
    Remus is about to find out if Hermione thinks he already knows. Glad she is at least thinking before she acts or accuses this time! Poor Elias, they have got to get him disconnected from Voldie or get Voldie to lay off the Crucios! Maybe someone should start dosing HIM with extra strength calming potion or get him into anger management classes!

    Author's Response: Now that is an image! Lol! Glad you’re enjoying this nonsense!
Title: Chapter 33 17 Jun 2021 2:22 pm
Reviewer: Ms_Prongs (Signed) [Report This]
    When I tell you I shrieked, I'm not kidding. The moment Hermione uttered the word "Harry" I shrieked and started to tear up. I know I said I was going to go back and re-read the other day, but I had to put it off due to a migraine that I've been fighting. I'm still dealing with it, but as soon as I saw this update I had to read regardless.

    Also poor Elias, poor Severus even! The heartache Sev must feel for Elias and the deep terror that Elias is feeling...I could feel it oozing out of the words - which is probably why I shrieked because I was so enthralled in the story.

    Any way, thank you again - and I NEED MORE! But I understand work... I'm currently working now. Well... waiting for calls. Yay working IT!

    Author's Response: Wow, there are some emotions in the reviews! I am cackling like a madwoman right now, not even going to lie. Not to worry, this story will still be here when you start feeling better, so no rush. I know I’m being mean, but it’s only like 6am for them in the story and Severus has a few more important things he needs to take care of before classes start…. He isn’t going to have a good day. I’m very happy to have made someone shriek! Glad you’re enjoying it! Feel better soon!

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