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Title: Chapter 34 10 Mar 2023 4:20 am
Reviewer: Melverne (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter. Again thank you for sharing.
Title: Chapter 34 14 Oct 2022 1:47 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    It’s gratifying to see Severus confiding in Lupin, after verifying his trustworthiness. He can be a good ally and source of support.
Title: Chapter 34 21 Aug 2021 4:30 am
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoys (Signed) [Report This]
    Nope, I didn't!😏 I just hoped that *Remus* wouldn't!

    Good! Sev needed someone else to share this secret with. Remus was a good choice.

    I just *love* how Sev keeps taking the wind out of Umbitch's sails!

    Now, he just needs to brew an undetectable poison for the bee-ahtch OR something to make her start spouting paranoid rantings...permanently!

    Tks!
    MelJ
Title: Chapter 34 26 Jun 2021 5:50 pm
Reviewer: MellarkandArt (Signed) [Report This]
    AHHHHHHHHH

    Author's Response: I know, right!?!?!?!
Title: Chapter 34 26 Jun 2021 4:39 am
Reviewer: Shellie (Signed) [Report This]
    Every chapter you post just makes me want the next one even faster! But that indicates how good your story is, so no worries. I am glad Snape confided in Remus since I think he needs more people to lean on. Poppy is great but she's one person. You did trick us with the Hermione thing. Poor Elias, he really needs a break.

    Author's Response: Snape just needs a friend and Poppy is just a bit too much in Albus's pocket imo. I'm not going to lie, I don't think Elias is going to be getting a break anytime soon. Not for a while at least.
Title: Chapter 34 26 Jun 2021 1:47 am
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh thank Merlin! I was thinking that remus might be more loyal to harry -- or at least to his dead friends-- so it'd be good to tell him now before he could find out and it get twisted around by hermiones stupid theories. Honestly, her theories had the whole school bullying Elias for a little while there (we haven't forgotten that lol). Glad severus has him there to help go through this with. Umbktch definitely is going to raise a fuss now that snape has publicly snubbed her. Hopefully her reaction doesn't endanger Elias too much. Also it's interesting to ser the whole of slytherin react to notts death. On one hand, it could be used to suss out who may be swayed from the dark side... on another hand, most stories don't usually have a slytherin parent as..liked. y'know there's lucius who everybody thinks is slimy usually and sometimes narcissa who can go either way. But this has to be one of if not the first ff I've read where a parent of a slytherin is actually a good person, or at least a person who the students like. Really cool plot

    Author's Response: Don't forget, Nott also tortured his wife while she was pregnant and ended up killing his infant daughter by-proxy. Don't forget that part too. Just because he is a wealthy benefactor does not mean that he was an upstanding individual in the slightest. The not all of the Slytherins are wealthy, so they aren't able to buy their position into a job unless they have a benefactor behind them. For the ambitious Slytherins, a leg up is a leg up no matter where it comes from. Sure, some of them wouldn't take the offer, but others... Yeah. Easy way to recruit for the Death Eaters too.
Title: Chapter 34 26 Jun 2021 1:38 am
Reviewer: magickorange (Signed) [Report This]
    Keep goinnnnnng ahhh, god i wish we heard the rest of the convo after snape says Harry found him

    Author's Response: Don't worry, there's plenty more to come!
Title: Chapter 34 25 Jun 2021 8:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank goodness Severus got there before Hermione, hopefully Remus can convince her to stay silent. Thank you for updating your wonderful story

    Author's Response: Thank you, thank you!

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