Terrific chapter! There was so much here to digest - the static electricity, the Dark Lord finding their connection, Lupin’s research into the undesirable uses of Muggle innovation, Frank’s uncanny understanding of Elias’s plight. It was a great chapter!
| Title: Chapter 39
| 06 Aug 2021 4:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Elias, it was lump in the throat time when he thought he was going home and didn’t. Oh my has a Voldemort found him and connected to him? It is now November and if we are following cannon Ron and Hermione will soon be visiting the ward. I love how you have him switching between his two personalities, very clever.
Remus’ research is pulling up interesting ideas about the wizarding world and ours and I’m sure they will be significant but I can’t see how at the moment. Thank you for an excellent chapter
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Poor Elias so confused and just wanting to go home
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| Title: Chapter 39
| 01 Aug 2021 5:15 am
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| Reviewer: Ella (Signed)
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This story is so good! I keep checking back in every few weeks and always get suckdd in, I accidently stayed up to 3am last night (oops), can't wait to see what happens next
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Well crap, Voldemort has managed to tune into Elias' signal again. Or vice versa. So now we know what disaster Shannon is dealing with. The reason your plot point was missed is its been too long since history class. LOL I learned about Cherynobyl in school, but its been almost thirty years since I graduated! Remus is lucky he didn't short circuit the computer. lol Interesting that Frank seems to know something is going on with him and they both have Cruciatus damage.
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| Title: Chapter 39
| 01 Aug 2021 1:03 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Oh I think if Elias describes his dream like that to remus, remus is going to make some big leaps with his research.i mean he felt like static when voledmort was using magic! When remus was first ranting about how muggles used it for bad my mind went "oh merlin do wizards not know about nuclear weapons and stuff" and then he learned about chernobyl and I figured he might go on a bit of a rampage-- he finally thought mugglez capable of doing something amazing only for them to stuff it up with nuclear weapons and meltdowns. Frightening that the ministry hid that from wizards; I mean I get not panicking the public but who says wizards can't get sick from radiation and whatnot? Anyway, awesome chapter -- thanks for it
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