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Title: Chapter 40 14 Oct 2022 5:54 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Lupin’s insight into the potion is so cool! I wonder how that will be used to help Elias. I love how Sirius is admirably rising to his task.
Title: Chapter 40 18 Sep 2021 2:05 pm
Reviewer: Ella (Signed) [Report This]
    It's been a while since you updated, (no pressure at all) but I was thinking about this story today and just wanted to make sure all is well. I saw your reply to another user, I'm in Australia so we've largely escaped Covid but I can imagine how crazy it must be. However,
    Even if things in life aren't going well, know that you have given a escape to so many people in your writing and that your stories made enough of a impact on me that I think about it all the time! Make sure you're taking care of yourself Author x

    Author's Response:

    I know, I know. Life's been a bit crazy here. Things are going ok, just... annoying. Truly annoying. I've been really lucky that the only person in my family to have gotten Covid was my younger sister and she didn't even realize she had it until after they tested her. She had gotten it from her roommate who tested positive, so she and her other roommate got tested even though they weren't feeling ill at all. She didn't start feeling sick until after they 'swabbed her brain' and even then just felt like she had a really nasty sinus infection.

    I am definitely taking care of myself, which is part of the reason there haven't been many updates. Sometimes you just can't crank out 5k word chapters every week, lol!

    Stay safe!

Title: Chapter 40 10 Sep 2021 2:06 am
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    It's been a while since the last update and I'm not begging for one -- just hoping you're doing okay and that you and your family are safe (if that's the reason for the delay)

    Author's Response: Couple reasons for the delay. 1: Bit o' writers block. 2: Work stuff. Covid cases are up so I'm having to work a loooot more. I work 12 hour shifts and basically work and go to bed. Wear a mask y'all! 3: Just a touch o' depression rearing its ugly head. Still working on this fic, so not to worry, it's just taking longer than expected.
Title: Chapter 40 21 Aug 2021 11:24 pm
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoys (Signed) [Report This]
    I knew that Fulgur was Latin for lightning from looking up fulgurites; the glass tubes formed when lightning strikes the ground or sand. Nice concept there, DP!

    So, perhaps a higher dose of the Fulgur potion or maybe dripping it directly on Elias' scar?

    I love that Frank and Alice seem attuned to what Elias is experiencing! This is the first story I've read that has the Longbottoms up and mobile; usually, it's only Alice giving Neville a candy wrapper. I love the stories where a cure is found and they at least get to be with Neville.
    You notice that Rowling only uses them as a plot point of sympathy for Neville but never cares enough to mention them again.
    Y'all may love her but her series makes me afraid for her children!🤨

    Thanks and I'm looking forward to the next chapter too!🤗
    You might have to let me know when you post again through a FFN PM, as the "Track this story" link seems to be broken too!😣

    MelJ
Title: Chapter 40 18 Aug 2021 7:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the research Remus and Sirius are doing and good to have Sirius taking an interest in life. I was missing Draco in the story and it was good to get his POV in this chapter. Now I need an update on how Tony’s and Kingsley are getting on! I’m not sure the Gryffindors should act so happy they may make Dumbledore suspicious. Thank you for a great chapter
Title: Chapter 40 17 Aug 2021 9:00 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the research Remus and Sirius are doing and good to have Sirius taking an interest in life. I was missing Draco in the story and it was good to get his POV in this chapter. Now I need an update on how Tony’s and Kingsley are getting on! I’m not sure the Gryffindors should act so happy they may make Dumbledore suspicious. Thank you for a great chapter
Title: Chapter 40 11 Aug 2021 3:42 am
Reviewer: Shell (Signed) [Report This]
    I really hope that the information Remus has found out will somehow help Harry. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 40 09 Aug 2021 6:31 pm
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm a bit worried, the slytherins need to be able to count on snape or else they've already lost. I hate to think that he needs to behave the way he's always behaved but the slytherins have so much stacked against them already.... anyway, awesome chapter as usual! Remus and Sirius tracking down the true origins of magic is throwing me for such a loop! It's such a marauder thing to do -- take what you see and kick it to the curb! Lol
Title: Chapter 40 08 Aug 2021 6:57 pm
Reviewer: Shellie (Signed) [Report This]
    So liquid lightning helps Elias stabilize. A very small amount and for a good reason! I would think liquid lightning would be best in small doses.

    Poor Draco, I really feel sorry for him and hope he can be told what is going on with the same restrictions the others have.

    You responded to my review but the review response thing isn't working. It just says Author's Response and then its blank. I noticed it for another author.

    Can't wait till next week too!

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