This chapter was short but intense. I could feel Elias' frustration and helplessness. I hope things change for the poor kid soon. And I miss the scenes with Draco and Elias.
Ahhh, no! Listen to Elly please! The storm is coming.
So many new stories/chapters on P and S that I just now got to this one. LOL Elias asleep when Arthur is attacked, uh oh, not good.
They need to set up a hospital type situation for him at Hogwarts. Snape knows the connection is real and he's missing out on important intel.
Nice to know that even with his memory gone, Gilderoy is still an idiot!
As usual, you have pulled us into your story and now we wait. :)
Author's Response: Or... now hear me out... I could do what I just did in the upcoming chapter. Which is arguably the worst possible option (insert finger-guns). As for Gilderoy, yeah, he's consistently an idiot. I can't change that.
Title: Chapter 42
| 10 Oct 2021 6:25 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter but oh dear I don’t want Arthur to die. I love how you use cannon events to feature in your story. Thank you for updating
Author's Response: Don't worry. Arthur doesn't die.
Looking forward to the chaos!
Author's Response: Chaos incoming.
Title: Chapter 42
| 09 Oct 2021 3:29 pm
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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I wanna be angry at them forcing that Dreamless sleep on him-- he's not going to sleep and now, he'll be trapped in voldemorts head watching Mr. Weasley die with no way out of it!-- but they're doing what would actually be the best option if he weren't who he is. Besides, it's not like Snape can go to Albus and warn him that harry had a vision about it anyway... idk. I like Arthur Weasley usually, but I don't know how he survives this. Anyway, he really needs his fulgurs if he's ever going to improve enough to get out of that hospital I think. But they're not going to give him his usual doses until he improves. So it's like the weirdest catch 22 situation. If he doesn't improve, he can't get what he needs to improve. Would hope there's a way to let Draco visit over the holiday but I fear Lucius finding out and telling Voldemort that Snape has a son and him being slightly smarter than Dumbledore with the timing and realizing that Elias is Harry. Oh so much to worry about! So grateful for a new chapter though you've no idea. Thank you for posting, I know times aren't really easier with COVID and all
Author's Response: Well.... the next chapter is up.... and... uh... WELCOME TO THE CHAOS ARC, ITS ALL CHAOS FOR THE NEXT FEW CHAPTERS MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ... sorry about that... Thanks for all the support! I really do appreciate it more than you know!
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