I hope Elliot's grandma will be ok.
I love how Harry's and Snape's relationship is growing, for being such a strict father he has a lot of tender and sweet moments. I can't wait for Harry to finally confess his fears and his life with the Dursleys to Snape. You are doing a great job!
Glad Elliot went to Severus's house, when he grandma collapsed.. Looking forward seeing what next..
| Title: Chapter 27 House Guest
| 03 Apr 2022 7:46 pm
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Thank you an interesting take on the Snape marriage. Thank you for updating
| Title: Chapter 26 A Game of Chess
| 20 Mar 2022 12:35 pm
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Thank you for exploring the reasons for the corporal punishments in the story. A lovely chapter thank you
| Title: Chapter 25 Anxiety
| 14 Feb 2022 8:46 pm
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I wish Poppy would come back and test Harry’s eyesight, I think some difficulties he is having would disappear. Thank you for updating
Nice chapter!! Waiting for the next chapter. Please write it soon.... Not make me wait for six months this time...
| Title: Chapter 24 New Commitment
| 28 Oct 2021 9:12 pm
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Loved the chapter especially Poppy, such good fun.
| Title: Chapter 23 The Slipper
| 14 Oct 2021 7:03 pm
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Sad as usual but they are reaching an understanding. Thank you for updating.
Author's Response: the next one shapes up to be comical though [if I can keep it that way]
| Title: Chapter 22 - A Reassurance, Of Sorts
| 30 Sep 2021 7:11 pm
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Lovely chapter I think Severus is beginning to realise that Harry has serious problems
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