oh :( i wish Snape uderstood the back ground of Harry's life, that he is severelly traumatices and all the phisycal punichmen (even the most soft) is agravating everithing. I hope Snape stop of abusing Harry soon.
Title: Chapter 16 Out of Sorts
| 15 Jun 2021 9:45 pm
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Reviewer: isa1027 (Signed)
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i love this story so far!! i get so excited when i see u updated. i wish i could give little harry a hug :( poor baby
Poor Harry! I cannot wait for Snape's point of view. Please update soon.
Title: Chapter 15 Contemporary Oliver Twist
| 05 Jun 2021 7:57 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very sad dream. Poor Harry doesn’t feel loved or wanted by anyone. I hope Severus overlooks or understands why Harry behaved like that. Thank you for updating
Title: Chapter 14 The Worst Feeling in the World
| 05 Jun 2021 12:08 pm
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Reviewer: Finnerad (Signed)
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Sinceramente me salto toda la parte del castigo porque no tiene sentido, es muy fuera de carácter para Snape e incongruente: No quiero que te hagas daño, te pegó. Uy si, va a aprender un montón. Harry no entiende nada y lo único que aprende es la evitación, nada útil. Siempre me han exasperado esas cosas.
Title: Chapter 15 Contemporary Oliver Twist
| 04 Jun 2021 12:00 am
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Very nice chapter. Severus was gentle and understanding in his dealings with Harry’s nightmare and grief.
Title: Chapter 14 The Worst Feeling in the World
| 01 Jun 2021 1:59 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very harsh but he had been frightened. I feel there is a change in how the punishment is given. It is now given because, in Pat, Severus had been frightened because of Harry’s behaviour.
Title: Chapter 14 The Worst Feeling in the World
| 29 May 2021 5:30 pm
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Reviewer: fringie7 (Signed)
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Ugh! Snape is too mean. And practically bipolar in his actions towards poor Harry.
Title: Chapter 14 The Worst Feeling in the World
| 28 May 2021 6:49 pm
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Reviewer: Greenprince (Signed)
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Snape's attitude towards Harry is getting worse, he doesn't seem to get better with time. He does not understand that he is a child who makes mistakes and hitting him is never the solution. I don't see that there is a path of redemption for him in this story, it saddens me to think that, because I feel very sorry for poor Harry, a child who has only known suffering and abuse, physical and emotional. First by his uncle and aunt and now by his father, a man who has not bothered to explain any of magic to him and who after each failure all he does is hit him and scare his son. A son who does not even know what is happening and who still believes that they will come for him.
Title: Chapter 13 Shopping Spree
| 24 May 2021 8:18 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh dear I think Harry is heading for trouble! Poor Harry he is always misunderstood by Severus. Thank you a lovely chapter
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