Title: Chapter 8 Swingers
| 21 Apr 2021 8:52 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I think I remember reading somewhere that it was in the North West, so a Manchester code might be appropriate. A good mixture of Severus being kind and harsh, but I don’t think he will like books treated this way. Thank you for updating.
I love the image of Severus teaching Harry to swing, and so good that he bought Harry birthday presents. Hoping this heralds the turning of the tide for them.
https:// postal-code. co .uk/postcode/Shropshire Just remove the spaces and it will take you to a website where you can point and click on a map and it will give you the address and the postcode for anywhere in the world (it seems). The address I gave you will take you directly to Shrewsbury, Shropshire.
Very good chapter! I can't wait for more! Poor Harry, he's trying so hard!
Title: Chapter 7 Home, Sweet Home
| 14 Apr 2021 7:19 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry, it must be bad to want to go to the Dursley’s house Thank you for updating
Title: Chapter 7 Home, Sweet Home
| 14 Apr 2021 3:44 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Thanks for another well written chapter. I hope Severus realizes sooner rather than later just how much emotional and psychological (not to mention physical) damage he’s inflicting on Harry. He’s losing Harry’s trust in him and reinforcing Harry’s fear of authority figures more generally, and I hope he wisens up before it’s too late.
I like how Snape has a duality of character, but I am concerned about the health (physical and mental) of little Harry, if he continues to treat him like that. I also wonder, if it is possible to know, when will Snape realize the harm he is doing to his son and if he will ever learn how his uncles treated him.
I loved it, continue soon, pls.
Title: Chapter 6 Rena Trellis’s Ward
| 12 Apr 2021 1:12 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Great chapter, thank you.
Title: Chapter 6 Rena Trellis’s Ward
| 11 Apr 2021 8:21 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter, I love “grandfather Al’s nightgown” thank you
Title: Chapter 5 Hospital
| 10 Apr 2021 8:40 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very good chapter with a lovely lot of angst. I hope Severus has learnt his lesson but I fear not!
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