Title: Chapter 6 Rena Trellis’s Ward
| 12 Apr 2021 1:12 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Great chapter, thank you.
Title: Chapter 6 Rena Trellis’s Ward
| 11 Apr 2021 8:21 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter, I love “grandfather Al’s nightgown” thank you
Title: Chapter 5 Hospital
| 10 Apr 2021 8:40 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very good chapter with a lovely lot of angst. I hope Severus has learnt his lesson but I fear not!
Title: Chapter 4 Blood and Fever
| 10 Apr 2021 8:31 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Quick thinking on both their parts. Has Severus traumatised the whole of Cokeworth? Very good chapter thank you
Good on the Healer for thinking about calling the Aurors on Snape for ignoring the ramifications of Harry picking blood weed barehanded. I mean really, Severus! But it looks like he’s having a change of heart, which is great.
A very nice, action-packed chapter. I like how you subtly conveyed Harry’s age. Severus’s rather dubious procurement of Eliot’s hair had me reflecting on the importance of Muggle rights and protection. I wonder if Harry’s blood poisoning will prove to be a turning point for him and Severus. Thanks for the nice chapter.
Title: Chapter 3 Gardening
| 05 Apr 2021 6:03 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I think he is seven going on eight. This is child cruelty and Severus should be taken to court! I understand he was upset but that is no excuse. Very well written chapter thank you.
Title: Chapter 2 The Grand Tour
| 05 Apr 2021 5:52 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry, you have made the Dursley’s house sound better than Severus’s! A good chapter thank you
Como ya dije en fanfiction.net snape roza el abuso con su crueldad, y yo creo que harry esta entre los 5-6 años, porque por lo que leí aun no usa gafas y nadie se a dado cuenta de que no puede leer por que no ve, así que debe haber empezado solo su primer año se primaria
Oh no, Harry was only trying to help! In answer to the author notes, he seems 8 or 9 to me.
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