| Title: Tempest
| 26 Jun 2021 7:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an excellent chapter. I think you have hit the nail really well with how the teachers ignored Harry’s problems in cannon I’m so glad you are addressing them through Severus
Another wonderful chapter. I really like that Snape is starting to take initiative in starting a relationship with his son, whether Harry likes it or not. And poor Harry, feeling the need to take more Dreamless sleep. I hope Severus catches him before he really harms himself. And the part with Madam Pomfrey was hilarious! Thanks for a lovely update.
I love this story and was so happy to see an update. And, even better, to read that this story is all planned out with the denouement ahead. This chapter was funny and nicely angsty. Pomfrey launching into a sex ed talk was hilarious. I loved the dual perspectives of how the characters felt inside, in contrast to how they acted outwardly. I love your writing style and am most certainly looking forward to reading more of this story and your future ones!
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