Title: Eruption
| 14 Jul 2021 8:24 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Awwww! Very sweet and fuzzy. Thank you so much a lovely feel good chapter
Love the fluff! My teeth ache, it's so sweet
This was a great chapter. I did like the fluffy parts and the gentle scolding Severus gave Harry for disobeying his orders. Well done on this. Sad to hear we are close to the end, but I look forward to more between these two characters.
Title: Convulsion
| 06 Jul 2021 6:43 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you, lump in the throat time for this chapter.
Author's Response: Awww thanks!!
Your stories are amazing, please continue all of them I'm a fan of your writing and tour characterization of Snape and Harry. And I love the way you put up their relationship ;)
Author's Response: thank you so much, I really appreciate it!!
Great chapter! I really like the dynamic of Severus wanting to pursue a relationship with Harry, and Harry remaining unsure. I’m so looking forward to their upcoming discussion and hope it serves to bolster Harry’s confidence in being able to rely on Severus. Thanks again for updating!
Author's Response: thank you!!!
I loved this chapter! What great development so far and I really enjoyed Severus’s “I will not let you go” moment. Aww! What Snape-like determination. I’m looking forward to Harry’s talk with Severus in the middle of the night. That will be interesting. I wonder if Severus will notice Harry’s addiction growing and question what he really went to see Madam Pomfrey for. Can’t wait.
Author's Response: thank you!!! I'm really quite proud of that "I will not let you go" moment myself : )
Title: Tempest
| 26 Jun 2021 7:27 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an excellent chapter. I think you have hit the nail really well with how the teachers ignored Harry’s problems in cannon I’m so glad you are addressing them through Severus
Another wonderful chapter. I really like that Snape is starting to take initiative in starting a relationship with his son, whether Harry likes it or not. And poor Harry, feeling the need to take more Dreamless sleep. I hope Severus catches him before he really harms himself. And the part with Madam Pomfrey was hilarious! Thanks for a lovely update.
I love this story and was so happy to see an update. And, even better, to read that this story is all planned out with the denouement ahead. This chapter was funny and nicely angsty. Pomfrey launching into a sex ed talk was hilarious. I loved the dual perspectives of how the characters felt inside, in contrast to how they acted outwardly. I love your writing style and am most certainly looking forward to reading more of this story and your future ones!
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