| Title: It's Severus
| 23 May 2021 4:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great description of the shops and shopkeepers. I think they are becoming a family and that is so good to see. Thank you for the chapter
It’s nice to see Harry enjoy being a child. An engaging and sweet chapter.
Thanks for the nice chapter. I like how Harry is embracing the opportunity to be the child that he is.
Poor Harry, its tough to lose so many toys when you only have 5 things to begin with! Severus is doing a good job but did forget about a child's imagination. Maybe instead of a map, he could put up barriers that limit the area Harry can go.
Lovely chapter. So nice that Severus is asking Harry more about himself, and loved the visit to the Hogsmeade school and shops.
Well done Severus - you're a quick learner. Lovely to see Harry getting the things he deserves, and opening up to Severus just a little.
| Title: Working Not To Disappoint
| 18 May 2021 6:53 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Definitely maths! Glad that Colm has given Severus a few much needed pointers to dealing with a child. Its also good to see that Severus has a long way to go in his own career, with much work to do - all too often he appears to have got a Potions Mastery in no time at all.
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