Always love a shopping trip, and it seems Harry did too.
Nice original start. Its good that looking after Harry can give Snape some definite advantages in progressing his own path.
Your stories NEVER disappoint. I do hope the teacher reminded Severus that even high school kids are shown how to do things before being given homework! You don't just give them the book and send them on their way. And Harry is much younger than that. His toys are awesome, I would love a dragon myself. What was the box the toy shop owner put in the bag?
Title: Working Not To Disappoint
| 15 May 2021 5:34 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for writing maths, it may be crazy to you but usual for us and Harry! Lovely chapter thank you
Title: More Than Rules
| 15 May 2021 5:12 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter. I’m wondering why none of the teachers, or Severus didn’t notice that Harry was missing meals. Thank you for updating.
Title: Black and Green
| 15 May 2021 3:46 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Sweet start to the story. Dumbledore’s choice of chairs is hilarious. Thank you for sharing the story with us
Title: Working Not To Disappoint
| 13 May 2021 11:29 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I love the character of Carcroft - someone more experienced with students (especially Slytherins) who Severus admires. I’m also really looking forward to Harry’s experience attending the school in Hogsmeade. Thanks so much for this great chapter.
Very nice chapter, thank you.
So many young Harry stories are fluffy, but yours feels gritty and true to the character of a younger Severus. I love the quid pro quo premise. Thanks so much for this new story.
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