| Title: Thirtieth August 1943
| 15 Jun 2021 6:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh dear be careful what you wish for! I don’t think Harry is going to like his father! Very clever I was wondering how Severus is going to fit into this. Thank you for continuing your wonderful story!
Author's Response: Thank you for another review :) it’s going to be a shock for Harry, that’s for sure!
Wonderful chapter. I’m looking forward to seeing what all has changed in this timeline, based on the letter they left for Dumbledore.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I am currently sprucing up chapter 3, and I plan to try and introduce what the main conflict for this story will be!
Amazing chapter, so excited for Harry’s reaction in the morning!!
Author's Response: I'm writing it right now! The pressure on reactions is always sooo high, so I really hope I do it justice for you guys
great!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review :)
| Title: If I Could Find A Way
| 08 Jun 2021 7:50 am
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| Reviewer: Arti (Signed)
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Nice start :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I can't wait to get more uploaded
I love this story. I hope ready next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi Rafaella, the next chapter is being edited as we speak. I then need to send it to the beta reader. I hope to have it up by the end of the week, though I am working a lot :(
| Title: If I Could Find A Way
| 26 May 2021 12:33 am
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| Reviewer: Shell (Signed)
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I can’t wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Hi Shell,
Thank you for the review. I am currently editing the following chapter before sending it to my beta. I hope to have it up very soon!
| Title: If I Could Find A Way
| 25 May 2021 8:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Excellent start to the story, you have got their characters just right, thank you
Author's Response: Hi fmh,
thank you for the review. I really hope the rest of the story continues to be as strong. I worked hard on character motivations, so I am really pleased that this has come through.
Nice, interesting chapter, I'm really looking forward to seeing what will happen next.
Good luck, Vee! ;)
Author's Response: Hi Luna,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I hope to have the next chapter up soon, but I still need to finish my current round of editing and send it to my beta.
Great start to the story. The tumult of emotion that Harry feels post-battle is palpable, and I’m really looking forward to seeing how this develops as the golden trio goes farther back in time than expected.
Author's Response: Hi cavehack,
thank you reading my story, and for sending such a nice review. I have to say, I am glad you felt what Harry was going through, it was that and characterisation that I really wanted to focus on in this chapter. It's important to set up 'your version'. I hope to have the next chapter updated soon.
thanks again
vee
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