Poor kid. He doesn't seem well enough to go to the Headmaster's office, let alone summer camp. I'm really interested to see what happens next. Great story so far. I'm loving it. Thanks so much for writing and posting it.
Awwwww, yay. Sweet chapter. I'm so glad that the Headmaster is listening and giving Harry an alternative for the summer. Great emotions in this chapter.
I know what you mean about the html coding. You should be able to copy and paste from your word document though.
Love it. Your descriptions are marvelous. Snape and Harry and Poppy are all in character. The story is engaging and well paced. Well done for a first chapter.
I adore it. This is just what I needed. Soft Snape is wonderful and he still feels in character.
| Title: Potion Batches
| 25 Aug 2021 8:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Okay, so you're not caught up to where you are on FFN. That's cool. I just saw this as recently updated here and hoped that there was more here than over there. =(
Well, no worries. I hope you soon get this site caught up to what's on FFN; I'm eager to figure out Dumblefu**'s agenda for sending a nearly terminal little boy to *camp* instead of an intensive care facility! I know the old arsewipe has one! I'm only hoping that Severus can look beyond Harry's parentage and see the abused and neglected *child* and figure out what the agenda is before it's too late!
See ya soon!
MelJ
Author's Response: Mhm, the HTML tags give me major migraines, hence the snail-paced updates; in addition to laziness. Sorry, though! ^^"
I'll be trying, haha. And I know, I'm still trying to work around that plothole, trying to stick to an accurate figure that I'm putting Severus to as well.
Thank you for the review!
I really like this so far!
| Title: The Offer
| 11 Jul 2021 8:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very expressive chapter
Another interesting chapter. I hope Harry has time to recover a little before heading to camp.
Great chapter! Harry’s recovery from the Chamber incident is usually glossed over, so it’s great to read such a thoughtful and well-written account of it.
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