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Title: Gary 18 Oct 2021 6:09 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    A great start with ominous undertones.
    I’m hooked.
Title: Gary 21 Jul 2021 8:25 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Ok, I love your stories and I hope I can carry on reading this story but I do find this topic rather painful and difficult. I like the way you have portrayed Gary, and Harry’s reservations about him and I’m sure you will do a great job showing how adults lead and groom children. I’m carrying on reading at the moment but may stop if I find it distressing, I hope you will understand it is not you but the story.

    Author's Response: Awww thank you for your support for my stories and I TOTALLY understand if you find that you can’t continue with this one! I’m definitely keeping it non-graphic as possible as I’m more interested in the recovery after trauma rather than the actual trauma, but I still understand if it’s too much!
Title: Gary 21 Jul 2021 12:01 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m a big fan of anything you write - even if it is dark and foreboding! I want to wrap this Harry up in a cocoon to keep him safe from the darkness in this world, and am very much looking forward to Severus appearing.

    Author's Response: thank you so much!!! I really appreciate the support you've shown for all of my stories :)
Title: Gary 20 Jul 2021 2:56 pm
Reviewer: Ms_Prongs (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder if anyone else in the world sits and contemplates how to begin a review of a story, or if I'm the only one. Lol!

    I am very intrigued by how this is going to go, and especially curious how/when Severus is going to come in to the picture. These types of stories are always so...ugh I can't think of the word, but they're hard to read, and equally hard to write I imagine. The scenario itself is uncomfortable but does happen in real life (unfortunately - especially in this day and age of technology in our hands) and I really feel like, if done well - a story like this could serve as a warning for any of the younger readers who come across it.

    Especially the way you're writing Gary - I can just see this serving as the perfect PSA for being on watch to Pedophiles.

    I sincerely cannot wait for the next chapter. Your writing is always so captivating, and draws you right in making the reader want more!

    Thank you for this intro

    Author's Response: Oh, I do as well! And I leave the absolute worst reviews, as much as I might love a story I just never seem to be able to find the right words! Thank you for yours though!!! I am hoping that this will help people recognize the signs of sexual abuse, as it is unfortunately something that happens quite often in real life. My own story differs quite a bit from Harry’s but I still find it helpful and a bit soothing to write or read stories about this topic. The way I have the outline now, Severus will be arriving around chapter six! Hopefully I’ll get the future chapters out soon, thank you so much for your support on all of my stories!!!

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