| Title: The World Beyond Camp
| 04 Aug 2021 9:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love Molly and Remus’ confrontation in York. I think the picture you posted may have been The Shambles in York, an amazing street. Thank you again
Thanks for another absorbing chapter. I liked the conversation about trust. It’s so central to Harry's outlook on the wizarding world right now. And the run-in with a certain family was spot on. I find myself wondering how much of this story you have mapped out in advance.
| Title: The World Beyond Camp
| 27 Jul 2021 6:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Kjoyp (Signed)
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You’ve done a lovely job on this. I like your introductory chapters of Harry’s thoughts. I would love more thoughts from Molly, Severus and Remus if possible.
I like that Harry apologized to Severus. When do you suppose they will get any amount of time together?
When Harry and Remus were separated, I thought you had Severus perfectly in character. He would do quiet background changes, wait and watch for when he could quietly effect important changes.
Author's Response: For at least the first 10 chapters Severus is in a supporting role, though there are moments when he and Harry end up together for whatever reason. Once Harry's back at school there's not a whole lot of time for him to spend with either character.
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