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Title: Chapter 5 24 Oct 2023 8:42 am
Reviewer: latinized (Signed) [Report This]

    absolutely criminal that this story remains unfinished but these 5 chapters make up for it- I love the characterisation and the detail of Harry's relationship with each of the main characters. Young snake has so much depth already, bless him. The dilemma in Harry having to basically choose to befriend either his father and his mother is very interesting; I would like to see how this plays out and if any truce of the sort is put into place. Would love to see some more harry and sirius interaction! Since he went back in time to save sirius and probably identifies with him more than James (since he never really knew him). However I'm sure this will remain a 5 chapter unfinished story for a while, if not indefinitely 💔 Alas

Title: Chapter 5 12 Dec 2021 12:18 am
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I get it lol I just like to rant, I'm a big time ranger. Next chapter, I'll probably be ranting about the marauders instead 😂
Title: Chapter 5 04 Dec 2021 1:15 am
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry is ridiculous. You fight your own dad and the man who went back in time for in the first place over a man who did nothing but belittle and degrade you at every opportunity? And don't give me the bullying stuff. Severus attacks them right back and I won't believe he didn't initiate it sometimes (we SEE his personality in canon. The whole grudge mightve been a lukewarm whatever that fizzled out eventually if he wasnt wghing it on too so yeah both sides are being bullies if that's what your want to call it- in fact, I disagreed with it being called bullying in canon as well. Sorry for the rant. I just hate harry turning on his own family like so many stories make him do, especially in defense of someone who canonically is nearly a VILLAIN for like 6 / 7 books

    Author's Response: Harry's really confused right now - he's going through a lot and he's not really sure of all of the details, especially as he's being dropped into a situation that he doesn't know the ins and outs of. He's going to eventually see how the situation swings both ways and how no one is really perfect, nor are any of them really "bad", as much as they're just two conflicting personalities who are unable to get along for any real amount of time under ANY circumstances. Just be patient a little longer - he will eventually stop being so ridiculous and will come to these conclusions as well, it may just take him longer to get there than it would you or I, lol. He's very much a "act now and think later" person a lot of the time, and that's currently what he's doing - getting caught up in little moments instead of seeing the big picture for what it is. 
Title: Chapter 5 01 Dec 2021 10:57 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very illuminating chapter!
Title: Chapter 5 30 Nov 2021 5:59 pm
Reviewer: Greenprince (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW un capítulo estupendo, me ha encantado. Sigue pronto, espero el siguiente capítulo!
Title: Chapter 4 25 Nov 2021 9:00 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Really looking forward to more.
Title: Chapter 1 25 Nov 2021 7:58 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoa!
    What a fantastic start.
    I’m hooked.
Title: Chapter 4 24 Nov 2021 10:55 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter, it must have been extremely difficult for Harry to brew alongside his sarky teacher
Title: Chapter 4 22 Nov 2021 7:53 pm
Reviewer: Greenprince (Signed) [Report This]
    I trully love this chapter!!
Title: Chapter 3 14 Aug 2021 4:36 am
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor harry, 20 years in the past and so close but still separate. But I don't want him to be unborn for sure! Great chapter

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