| Title: Return of the Werewolf
| 09 Jul 2018 11:47 am
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| Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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An interesting coil...
but you have a plot-hole here - though both Severus and Lupin are not very caring of a stick-thin, scared boy, surely they would not rush off to buy things 'for hours' without checking him for newly bleeding cuts, giving him a warm meal, and a change af fresh clothes? And at least speaking to him, trying to calm him down; his behaviour would make any parental figure take note...Why don't they?
Severus, at least, is always written being highly intelligent and a master of sensing the slightest signs of danger. How about a Elf-search of his rooms for sharp objects? or a charm to alert himself when Harry tries to cut himself?
A.Dum. wouldn't place blind obedience above keeping Harry happy, healthy and safe, would he? 'irony.'
They are very blind guardians. All three.
| Title: Between Life and Death
| 25 Mar 2016 8:24 am
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| Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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What do you mean with mistress wolf's part?
| Title: The Point of No Return
| 23 Mar 2016 7:42 am
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| Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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I'm glad Harry is starting to heal.
oh my God, i didn't even know that there was such thing as FFN portal for Harry and Snape and i was really happy to find this and that your story was the first one i read!! it took me almost 24 hours to finish, i even sacrificed my sleeping time to read haha
anyway, Finding a Father is a really good story, i love how you described the bond between Harry and Snape. You are an awesome writer! Good luck for your next writing :)
i enjoyed this whole story it made me laugh and cry and get mad with the characters that i believe is the mark of a great author :)
awww what an ending Ginny is indeed perfect for Harry
| Title: Christmas at Snape Manor
| 16 Jan 2011 4:28 am
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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I love Ginny in this I think he is one of his strengths right now
| Title: When It Rains, It Pours
| 16 Jan 2011 4:07 am
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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awww Ginny i love that you are using her as the true friend and confidente because it is s true in some ways she would indeed understand
I just read this in about three days, I was hoping you would include Lily and James' sorting but alas off to read your other stories and not comment even though I really like the ;)
what?! I think that Finding a Father was either the first or second fanfiction i ever read on HPFF like ten thousand years ago but it was never completed, but I always remembered your penname and when i saw it on this site, i just had to check to see if this story was on here, and it was! Completed! I cant wait to finally finish it!
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