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Reviews For Finding a Father
but you have a plot-hole here - though both Severus and Lupin are not very caring of a stick-thin, scared boy, surely they would not rush off to buy things 'for hours' without checking him for newly bleeding cuts, giving him a warm meal, and a change af fresh clothes? And at least speaking to him, trying to calm him down; his behaviour would make any parental figure take note...Why don't they? Severus, at least, is always written being highly intelligent and a master of sensing the slightest signs of danger. How about a Elf-search of his rooms for sharp objects? or a charm to alert himself when Harry tries to cut himself? A.Dum. wouldn't place blind obedience above keeping Harry happy, healthy and safe, would he? 'irony.' They are very blind guardians. All three.
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