I can understand Snape’s ire at having the truth of his daughter’s background and her important relationships with people he knows be kept hidden from him. Although his behavior was undoubtedly irrational and despicable, he deserves to know the truth! I hope that Harry can persuade Holly that her dad was only trying to protect her on a primal level. Thanks for the update, and looking forward to what’s ahead.
A strange punishment for an angry person. Leaving him isolated and alone with his thoughts. I would think that even as an adult Severus would find it difficult to know that Eileen left him with Tobias and went on to parent a different child, even if it was his daughter. Part of him would be grateful for Holly’s sake but the child within would wonder why not me? An interesting chapter. I’m wondering what’s in that album…
| Title: Turf War
| 03 Nov 2022 10:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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What a brilliant chapter! There is so much going on and secrets that I’m surprised you can hold it all together. As interesting as the story is I find the relationships between the characters absolutely fascinating. Thank you so much for continuing this story
| Title: Nip it in the Bud
| 09 Oct 2022 9:15 pm
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Thank you an excellent and long chapter. Given Severus’s temper I’m not surprised he reacted so badly but surely even he will realise he has gone too far this tie. I loved the breakfast scene, Holly is such a Sneaky little Slytherin, and getting Harry to braid her hair was wonderful, especially Lavender’s reaction I’m looking forward to seeing Harry doing her hair! Thank you so much for updating your outstanding story.
Great chapter! Holly was so clever and sweet. I can understand Severus’s reaction, and hope he learns the back story soon. I wonder why Lucius or others “in the know” didn’t better prepare him for Holly’s inevitable behavior. I’m so looking forward to the next chapter, and many thanks for this great one!
So good! Dont wait too long to give more! I wanna know what happens! I'd give 12 chocolate frogs if I could!
I'm so glad Harry and Holly are reunited now!
As for the rest of the chapter, I'm always glad with how long you make these. There was so much stuff happening and it was a joy to read as usual. 😊
Also, I'm curious about how Harry was able to feel Holly's distress from so far away. I wonder if that will come into play again later. 🤔
| Title: Never a Rose without the Prick
| 05 Sep 2022 9:08 pm
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Thank you for a fantastic chapter. I loved the last scene it may be cheesy but it was sweet and touching. I’ve been a little confused about why Severus had not found out about Harry from Iris’s will so glad that was mentioned.
| Title: Never a Rose without the Prick
| 05 Sep 2022 12:24 am
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Holly is a devious little Snapelet, indeed. Thanks for the nice long chapter. I enjoyed the sweet chapter end, and am looking forward to Severus putting the pieces together.
| Title: Garden Variety
| 04 Aug 2022 9:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh dear a boggert I think this is not good! Lovely long chapter thank you. I love the different trails of the story, Regulus is becoming such an interesting character and I love the fact that he is independent of Dumbledore but fighting for Harry as a boy and not a war hero. Thank you so much for updating your excellent story
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