| Title: Grasp The Nettle
| 18 Oct 2021 7:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Fantastic chapter! You are cleverly bringing the webs of the story together and the tension is rising to screaming pitch, thank you so much.
Hm, Severus is a Slytherin. Can he get over his undeserved Harry hate to see that HARRY is his key to his daughter? Be the one to give her back her brother and he will have made a huge stride in her eyes.
Always glad to see an update. Another excellent chapter
Terrific chapter! I simply love this story.
I'm seriously loving this story so far, your writing is so good! I feel so bad for both Holly and Severus though; their relationship is so strained and, well, broken. I just hope that they'll eventually be able to amend it together- with Harry as an addition as well.
Oh, it's so weird though you know? I'm not saying it's like bad or anything, but like; yeah, kinda bad. Scrambled, in a way, I guess. There's just so many secrets, so many things that would make me scratch my head.
The irony is so hilarious though; Lucius knows it.
I can't wait to see how Harry and Holly might see each other again and how things progress further into the story. Anticipating your future updates!
Really enjoying this and looking forward to more.
I LOVE this chapter. It os great, your style of writting is just magnificent. I hope you continue soon.
| Title: That Old Chestnut
| 06 Oct 2021 8:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh dear! I feel the quotation “Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we start to deceive” sums up the actions of Dumbledore here.
Very good chapter I loved Narcissa’s rant.
I’m looking forward to Harry and Holly reuniting, and Snape connecting all the puzzle pieces!
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