Amazing chapter. It bubbles and churns with vitality. Your story is so easy to feel and get lost in.
| Title: A Tumbleweed Moment
| 04 Oct 2021 5:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wonderful chapter thank you. I love your Lucius, he is very entertaining. The ending was very good, I loved Narcissa she definitely hit the nail on the head.
Jesus christ. I sure wasn't expecting her to say that!
And oh God, the scene with Harry and Holly made me cry! I'm so glad she got his letter before coming downstairs. I hope they can be reunited soon! Holly is gonna need so much emotional support dealing with all these changes in her life.
Tobias is sure a piece of work, but the interaction between him, Snape, and Mallfoy sure was entertaining. Snape definitely gets his mouth from him.
Whoa, Holly...! That was a killer line at the end! Loved all the character interactions among all the various groups of people. But the scene with Holly being driven away... Poor Holly, poor Harry... Soooo sad. 😞 But the visit to Tobias really made my eyebrows rise-- who would've thought Lucius could provide such excellent moral support??! I love to see how you put your own unique spin on all the characters, canon or non. Waiting eagerly for next chapter!
I love the last comment though this chapter is very sad
Oh my god! I can't belive this chapter, poor Harry and Holly... Of course, I need to know what happend next. Continue soon, I love it!
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