Title: Lose Your Gourd
| 13 Jan 2022 5:05 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely long chapter thank you. The web gets more and ,more tangled and Draco and Severus are doing themselves no good at all in Holly’s eyes. Can’t wait to see how they both react to the revelation of Harry and Holly.
Great chapter as usual! I really like seeing the different relationship dynamics at play here. It really makes the changing character p.o.v interesting. Everyone's reaction to an event or person is different but ultimately adds to the story without feeling like a retread of established events.
I'm really looking forward to how this meal with Snape Sr plays out.
I love how you’re showing how Holly and Severus are similar while still making them individuals. Maybe hatred for Tobias is something they can agree on.
Great chapter highlighting the various relationship dynamics at play.
Nicely written interactions between both friends and enemies.
Omg El capítulo ha estado genial, me encanta, de verdad. Sigue pronto, por favor. Estoy deseando que Holly y Harry se reencuentren y quiero ver la reacción de Snape al saber la verdad, también me pregunto cómo será su reacción al saber cómo han tratado a Harry sus tíos durante años y si se sentirá mal por eso. ¿Será capaz de arreglar su relación con su hija?
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