| Title: Nip it in the Bud
| 09 Oct 2022 9:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an excellent and long chapter. Given Severus’s temper I’m not surprised he reacted so badly but surely even he will realise he has gone too far this tie. I loved the breakfast scene, Holly is such a Sneaky little Slytherin, and getting Harry to braid her hair was wonderful, especially Lavender’s reaction I’m looking forward to seeing Harry doing her hair! Thank you so much for updating your outstanding story.
Great chapter! Holly was so clever and sweet. I can understand Severus’s reaction, and hope he learns the back story soon. I wonder why Lucius or others “in the know” didn’t better prepare him for Holly’s inevitable behavior. I’m so looking forward to the next chapter, and many thanks for this great one!
So good! Dont wait too long to give more! I wanna know what happens! I'd give 12 chocolate frogs if I could!
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