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Reviews For No Bed of Roses
Title: Lay of the Land 24 Nov 2023 2:00 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Holly is the best. Gotta love her sass and forthrightness. I always enjoy seeing Harry and Neville looking out for each other. Snape is sour grapes for sure.

    Author's Response: Holly has no fear of Snape. Harry might be docile for her sake, but she won't take any injustice to her brother from Snape
Title: Short Straw 24 Nov 2023 1:43 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely long chapter! Holly is a spitfire—I approve. What Snape did for Lucius at the end was touching.
Title: Lay of the Land 18 Nov 2023 12:28 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m so happy to see this updated.
    I just hope Severus pulls his head out of his a*se before he irreparably damages any possibility of a relationship with Holly.

    Author's Response: Jury's out on where Snape sticks his head next...
Title: Lay of the Land 17 Nov 2023 6:39 pm
Reviewer: Binte Muhammad (Signed) [Report This]
    Honestly, severus is kind of stupid in here. If he wanted to appease Holly, he should have praised the food even if he didn't like it.

    Harry's smart, I like him. I like Neville too. Overall, an amazing chapter as always!

    Author's Response: Snape still has many issues to work through. ALso, pride comes before the fall and all that lol

    Author's Response: Snape still has many issues to work through. ALso, pride comes before the fall and all that lol
Title: Short Straw 13 Nov 2023 8:21 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Thank you so much for updating your excellent story. I'm so sorry you have had a difficult time lately and I hope that things improve for you soon.

    a lovely chapter and I love the interactions between the inhabitants and visitors at Grimmuld Place. Tonkin is a good confidant for Sirius and I hope she makes him see that being antagonistic to Holly will not I dear him to Harry. Severus just can't leave the Harry/Holly situation alone, but I loved Holly's response to the hair cutting idea, she certainly knows how to take the arguments to the enemy!



    Author's Response: Holly is a lovely brat and I love how she's not afraid to clap back at Snape. He deserves every bit of her sass
Title: Short Straw 10 Nov 2023 9:33 pm
Reviewer: Binte Muhammad (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww,how sweet!

    Severus needs to get along with Harry, or he might lose her forever.

    Also, bold of Lucius to assume that Harry couldn’t have kept Holly without his help. Just shows that he still doesn't truly know Harry or Holly. They're really resourceful when they want to be.

    Author's Response: Lucius does have puffed up sense of importance
Title: Take Root 31 Aug 2023 8:22 am
Reviewer: animefreak728 (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how each character has a blind spot that correlates well with their characterization. No one's perspective of an event is perfect and what they don't notice gives us a deeper understanding of their character.

    Snape's perspective always fills me with anger though, not gonna lie. I wanna smack him so bad. Lol. 😆

    Also, something about Malfoy sweating like a wet rat after a workout is funny as hell. Excellent addition to the story. 😆

    Author's Response: The characters in the story aren't too different to RL people. We all have our own perspective and instincts and intuitions - a lot of which is based on out experiences. Some people deal with better than others. Snape comes under the category of needing help to deal with his issues. And sweating like that is probably something Lucius has never done before in his life 😆

    Author's Response: The characters in the story aren't too different to RL people. We all have our own perspective and instincts and intuitions - a lot of which is based on out experiences. Some people deal with better than others. Snape comes under the category of needing help to deal with his issues. And sweating like that is probably something Lucius has never done before in his life 😆
Title: Thorn in the Side 26 Jul 2023 8:53 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much for updating. It was the perfect excuse for going back to the beginning.
    I’m loving it.

    Author's Response: Thank you- that means alot d84;a039;d84;a039;

    Author's Response: Thank you- that means alot d84;a039;d84;a039;
Title: Take Root 25 Jul 2023 2:39 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    The negotiations were fun! I do wish the adults would put the pieces together a little more quickly, but hopefully soon!

    Author's Response: We all know the adults in HP are self-absorbed and more than a little daft
Title: Take Root 21 Jul 2023 4:23 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much for the long interesting chapter.
    I loved your take on the muggle born and their games it was so thought provoking and interesting. I’m exasperated with the adults and how they skirt the real issues. They have had so many hints and Lucius especially with his knowledge should be seeing patterns and worries. But it all makes for a brilliant story so thank you so much for continuing to share it with us.

    Author's Response: There's more to come on muggle sports - it's taken off in a way I didn't expect

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