Fun chapter! Thanks for updating.
Title: Busy as a Bee
| 16 Mar 2023 12:03 pm
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Reviewer: Iris (Signed)
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Absolutely love your stories! Can’t wait for more😍
Title: Busy as a Bee
| 15 Mar 2023 9:41 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I can see why you named the chapter as you did, very busy indeed. I loved to see Holly and Harry flying, so sweet. I hope Harry can outwit Lucius, I’m amazed he can’t see how his behaviour to the Weasleys is affecting there relation ship. Perhaps he will when he sees Harry tutoring them. I loved seeing Sirius, Andromeda and Narcissa interact together and to hear that once even Bellatrix was friendly. The description that Andromeda gave for the reason for Tonks’ name was hilarious! Dudley being a “Personal Trainer is a wonderful twist and so original. All in all a brilliant chapter thank you
It's interesting how Malfoy Sr didn't realize why Harry looked disappointed in his response. You'd think that with all his scheming he'd know to use the Weasleys as a way to foster Harry's goodwill. But I suppose that's his ego.
I like how the adults are getting so into exercising. It could lead into some interesting things later on. I'm also glad to see Dudley getting involved and I'm curious if his parents know about it. :)
I think Eileen is mostly powerless, poor, and recovering from abuse. Dumbledore is coming from a position of great power. For me, I’m more sympathetic toward Eileen’s situation than Albus’s. Your story continues to be fascinating and well written.
Title: Oma's confession
| 11 Feb 2023 5:33 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I agree with your summary. I have never liked Dumbledore because he never felt he should check on Harry or help him with his home life. He didn’t give Harry the tools to help him make choices and excused it as being for Harry’s benefit. No adult should knowingly leave a child in an abusive situation and he did. Thank you the letter was very enlightening
Title: Through the Gravepine
| 11 Feb 2023 5:10 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great fun and serves Severus right. Draco is so like Severus! If not for his looks he could be his son! Talk about foot in mouth! Thank you for a lovely chapter.
Title: Wood for the Trees
| 11 Feb 2023 4:12 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Excellent chapter I loved the different viewpoints. I very rarely agree with Lucius but Severus definitely needs to get his head out of his behind! You are portraying the hatred Severus has for Harry so well. He is even prepared to upset Holly in order to get even with Harry. I think he needs to see a shrink or two. Thank you so much for well put together chapter
Thanks for this letter. It was illuminating. Eileen was interfering, indeed. I wonder if Harry, Holly, and Severus will forgive her.
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