Great chapter! Holly was so clever and sweet. I can understand Severus’s reaction, and hope he learns the back story soon. I wonder why Lucius or others “in the know” didn’t better prepare him for Holly’s inevitable behavior. I’m so looking forward to the next chapter, and many thanks for this great one!
So good! Dont wait too long to give more! I wanna know what happens! I'd give 12 chocolate frogs if I could!
I'm so glad Harry and Holly are reunited now!
As for the rest of the chapter, I'm always glad with how long you make these. There was so much stuff happening and it was a joy to read as usual. 😊
Also, I'm curious about how Harry was able to feel Holly's distress from so far away. I wonder if that will come into play again later. 🤔
Title: Never a Rose without the Prick
| 05 Sep 2022 9:08 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for a fantastic chapter. I loved the last scene it may be cheesy but it was sweet and touching. I’ve been a little confused about why Severus had not found out about Harry from Iris’s will so glad that was mentioned.
Title: Never a Rose without the Prick
| 05 Sep 2022 12:24 am
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Holly is a devious little Snapelet, indeed. Thanks for the nice long chapter. I enjoyed the sweet chapter end, and am looking forward to Severus putting the pieces together.
Title: Garden Variety
| 04 Aug 2022 9:01 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh dear a boggert I think this is not good! Lovely long chapter thank you. I love the different trails of the story, Regulus is becoming such an interesting character and I love the fact that he is independent of Dumbledore but fighting for Harry as a boy and not a war hero. Thank you so much for updating your excellent story
Wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed your portrayal of Regulus and what he’s been spending his time on these past years. His honesty with (and approach to) Dumbledore was refreshing. The moment with Filch was really touching. The chapter end was quite a cliffhanger! Thanks so much for updating your wonderful story.
I like that Harry does housework when stressed. It's a neat little character detail, and makes sense given his upbringing.
Thanks for the long, lovely chapter. I can almost taste those delicious blueberry pancakes.
Title: Watch Grass Grow
| 02 Jul 2022 10:00 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an excellent chapter. I loved the whole of the pancake making and eating especially Severus’s reaction! Thank you for the update a lovely long chapter
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