| Title: Watch Grass Grow
| 02 Jul 2022 10:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an excellent chapter. I loved the whole of the pancake making and eating especially Severus’s reaction!
Thank you for the update a lovely long chapter
I liked how you wrote about inter-Slytherin politics.
| Title: Easy as Falling off a Log
| 15 Jun 2022 8:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wonderful chapter thank you for updating. I hope holly’s foot is ok.
I like how you are bringing the two timelines together but I hope Harry sees Holly before the end of the summer
| Title: Easy as Falling off a Log
| 13 Jun 2022 11:52 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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It’s good that Draco is getting some hard lessons in how his behavior impacts others. Thanks for the nice long chapter. I’m looking forward to Holly and Harry reuniting, as it seems Holly could really use his support and presence in her life as she adjusts to her new circumstances.
Draco: Well if it isn't the consequences of my own actions. XD
I've been waiting for Holly to confront Draco about his bullying and prejudices, and I was not disappointed. Really looking forward to how the next chapter plays out. Hopefully this is the start of Draco pulling his head out of his ass.
Another enjoyable chapter. I find myself anxious for Holly and Harry to get to have a brief visit together at least. It’s funny. I’m perfectly patient waiting for Severus and Holly to get on the same page though.Poor Draco, he can’t seem to get out of his own way!
Awesome! Glad to see you updating! :)
I love how multifaceted all the characters are. You're very good at making each character feel like a real person. So far there hasn't been a single character that's one note, and everyone has been given a good amount of characterization and time without taking too much away from our main characters.
I also like how there's no real right and wrong narratively. We just see each person's perspective. It's interesting.
Thanks for the wonderfully long and beautifully written chapter. I was so hoping that one of those old photos would include Harry! I’m looking forward to that revelation.
| Title: Muck and Nettles
| 17 Apr 2022 12:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for a lovely long chapter. I love how you are holding the various strands together and gradually bringing them together. I can’t wait for the meeting with Harry but I’m trying to be patient. I veer from being mad at Severus and then feeling sorry for him.
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