Already a brilliant start to a heartrendingly warm story. I look forward to the next chapter. The interaction between Snape and Harriet is melting my heart like a marshmallow in hot chocolate.
This is so well done, you won't believe how much I cried reading this through. I won't lie though, I was bawling my eyes out the most when Severus was ignoring the signs. But seriously, this is so awesome, I'd probably binge read this harder than watching any Netflix show.
Lupin, as well, brilliant addition to the team!
Title: Chapter 4
| 30 Sep 2021 8:14 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely chapter
Aww, poor Harriet. This is a lovely story so far, and I look forward to more.
Title: Chapter 3
| 28 Sep 2021 7:05 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you. I loved the letter and their reactions to it
I’m curious and would love to see more of this story. I haven’t really read a female Harry Potter, and I like your take on her. Looking forward to the next chapter.
I love this already!! Little Harriet is so precious! And Severus is so very in character! I can’t wait for him to begin to warm to her. I look forward to your next update! xx
Title: Chapter 2
| 23 Sep 2021 7:37 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter thank you. I loved their conversation it was so in keepin with the characters. Thank you
Title: Chapter 1
| 23 Sep 2021 7:20 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely start to the story. Only point I want to make is that it is very unlikely that a snow plough will be in a Surrey street in December or at any time! A small point and it didn’t detract from the excellent story.
Great start to the story! Harriet’s circumstances are heartbreaking, and I hope Snape keeps watch over her. Looking forward to seeing how your story unfolds!
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