Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 2 21 Sep 2021 11:30 am
Reviewer: Greenprince (Signed) [Report This]
    I ADORE THIS STORY
Title: Chapter 2 21 Sep 2021 9:59 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Ugh you'd think Petunia would enjoy dressing a girl in clothes that fit her.

    Petunia is pretty awful. That poor kid.

    I'm really glad that Snape was able and willing to show Harriet some magic. That must of been very special.

    i'm really glad that Snape reassured her about being magic.

    I really like that Harriet likes glitter too. Totally fits with Harry Potter liking gold and this being the female version. Love it.

    Thanks for writing this story and staring!
Title: Chapter 1 21 Sep 2021 9:56 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start! I like your female Harry, she seems very in character and well rounded. I really enjoyed reading from Snape's POV.

    I'm really worried about the frost bite though. Is that going to heal? On her fingers. They might not.

    I wish Snape had wrapped her in his coat or his body heat. Harriet is no doubt anemic. Poor kid, she clearly needs help.

    I loved the start! The chapter length was glorious!

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