I really like the way that Snape interacted with Neville, and also enjoyed the forest scene.
Thanks for your reflection on the futility of punishing a child for being attacked! And thanks for another great chapter.
An interesting take on the trio going for the stone. I loved how Snape noticed Dumbledore’s disappointment.
An interesting take on the trio going for the stone. I loved how Snape noticed Dumbledore’s disappointment.
Title: Chapter 10
| 06 Nov 2021 10:07 pm
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Love the letters and the friendship they are forming. Thank you for updating
Title: Chapter 9
| 26 Oct 2021 10:24 am
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Loved the chapter, Ron was showing Harry a lot of insight into how usual relationships work, which was hilarious but so touching. I love how you show that Harry doesn’t understand warmth and love and feeling wanted.
Title: Chapter 8
| 23 Oct 2021 8:18 pm
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Thank you a good chapter, I love their correspondence, it shows his caring side.
Title: Chapter 7
| 20 Oct 2021 10:36 am
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Very sinister chapter thank you so much. I love that Dumbledore is calling him Harry. Thank you for updating
Title: Chapter 6
| 15 Oct 2021 9:44 am
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Wow the story is taking a deep turn. Very well written and exciting. Sorry I pressed send by accident on the first review! Thank you for updating
Title: Chapter 5
| 13 Oct 2021 8:53 pm
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Thank you a lovely chapter. Severus as a mentor is very sweet and I loved the forbidden forest scene.
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