Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

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Title: Chapter 5 09 Feb 2022 3:27 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like the way that Snape interacted with Neville, and also enjoyed the forest scene.
Title: Chapter 4 09 Feb 2022 3:14 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for your reflection on the futility of punishing a child for being attacked! And thanks for another great chapter.
Title: Chapter 11 09 Feb 2022 6:19 am
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    An interesting take on the trio going for the stone. I loved how Snape noticed Dumbledore’s disappointment.
Title: Chapter 11 09 Feb 2022 6:19 am
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    An interesting take on the trio going for the stone. I loved how Snape noticed Dumbledore’s disappointment.
Title: Chapter 10 06 Nov 2021 10:07 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the letters and the friendship they are forming. Thank you for updating
Title: Chapter 9 26 Oct 2021 10:24 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the chapter, Ron was showing Harry a lot of insight into how usual relationships work, which was hilarious but so touching. I love how you show that Harry doesn’t understand warmth and love and feeling wanted.
Title: Chapter 8 23 Oct 2021 8:18 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a good chapter, I love their correspondence, it shows his caring side.
Title: Chapter 7 20 Oct 2021 10:36 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very sinister chapter thank you so much. I love that Dumbledore is calling him Harry. Thank you for updating
Title: Chapter 6 15 Oct 2021 9:44 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow the story is taking a deep turn. Very well written and exciting.
    Sorry I pressed send by accident on the first review!
    Thank you for updating
Title: Chapter 5 13 Oct 2021 8:53 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a lovely chapter. Severus as a mentor is very sweet and I loved the forbidden forest scene.

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