Well that was nice.
Also, I agree with the forgiveness thing. The sating "forgive and forget" is wrong. We should fogive and move past it, especially if the person is near and dear to us, however, it should not be forgotten. "Once bitten, twice shy" forgiveness isn't endless and if someone says sorry, but keeps doing whatever is hurting you, then they don't mean it, they aren't going to change, and are doing more harm than good and are, what is termed, a toxic relationship.
Anyway, I like this and am having fun rereading.
| Title: The Letters From Molly And Sirius
| 04 Oct 2021 4:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for starting the sequel. Harry needs to grow up and Severus is doing a good job in helping him and giving him a good memory to support him. Sirius is behaving very badly, and trying to guilt Harry is despicable.
| Title: The Letters From Molly And Sirius
| 04 Oct 2021 12:03 am
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| Reviewer: Shell (Signed)
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I really am enjoying your story so far. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
"...preferably when I am present so I can see the look on his face." 😆 Gotta love your way with Snape's unexpected sense of humor! But what I really relate to in this chapter (as will most readers) is the aftermath/fallout of broken-but-awkwardly-mended relationships. It's so difficult to regain what was previously taken for granted. As for Molly and Sirius... Well, I think Harry needs to have a one-to-one talk with each, sort of like Sirius suggested (despite his appearing to be obliviously dense as to WHY Harry doesn't want to write to him). Molly would understand, if only Harry gave her the opportunity (he's seriously behaving rudely after Molly did apologize) but I still think Sirius might get defensive, and THAT would be an interesting scene to watch play out.
I’m so glad you’ve decided to continue this.
Great start.
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