I really liked that mix of their old roles and their new found standing showing through during their first conversation. And I also grew all warm inside when Harry thought about the feeling of safety Ron's and Hermione's presence is giving him. Lovely chapter and, of course: Yay!!!! Severus woke up!!!😀
Author's Response: Thank you for all the comments you’ve been leaving on the story, I really appreciate them! And I’m glad you liked their first conversation and the trio scenes :)
That first conversation felt so true to the circumstances. It was really well done.
Title: Waking up
| 20 Oct 2021 8:54 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very good meeting between the two. It wasn’t sentimental but they were both in character to an extent but moving forward. Thank you so much for the story
Author's Response: Thank you for taking your time to write a review for each chapter, it makes me smile and gives me motivation to keep writing. It's a rare thing nowadays to see somebody that cares about sharing their thoughts with the author, so thank you for that :) And I'm really happy that you liked their first meeting. It's actually what I wanted to show: that they didn't change completely as people and that their relationship didn't get better automatically. But also that they have grown and that they could try to improve their relationship little by little. It's one of my favourite things to see in fanfics, tbh, how they go from hating/not liking each other to being such an important part in each other's lifes. It melts my heart hahah
This is great!
Author's Response: Im happy you liked it! Thank you for the review :)
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