Awww, I liked this. The deep friendship between the three of them is warming me from inside out. And what I like just as much is that Ron had matured into this brilliant boy/ young man instead of being an immature prick like he ist some schön to be (or has been at times in the books).
Thank you for this chapter!
Take care and stay well.
Author's Response: Thank you, you too :) And yes I really like Ron and his evolution, as well as the trio friendship. I hate when in fanfics they don’t give them the importance that they have. They are literally willing to die for each other ffs! Anyway, thank you for another comment!
You’ve captured the feelings of recovery from loss so nicely. I can feel the trio’s melancholy, as well as their desire to find light in their lives again. I’m looking forward to more conversations between Harry and Snape ahead.
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| 24 Oct 2021 7:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for updating. I feel that some of the conversation is stilted but I think that is because you use a different format for showing conversation that I’m still getting used to. I love this story so much thank you
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know! I was actually thinking of changing it from - to "" since you are not the first person to tell me something like that. I will try to edit the previous chapters and fix that :) And I have to admit that I did have a bit of trouble writing the dialogue on the 4th chapter, maybe that's why it felt a bit stilted... But I'm more confident on the writing of the 5th one so I hope you liked that one more :)
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