| Title: Chapter 4: Harry's Story
| 02 Aug 2022 8:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for a long and satisfying update. I love the interaction of Severus and Harry a Harry with his friends. Can’t wait to read the next part.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! I've been struggling with trying to keep my chapters from getting too long, so I'm happy to hear this one worked well.
I was so happy to see this update! I’m really enjoying your story. I hope Severus can put aside his deep negative feelings towards Harry and play his new role more effectively. Whatever is happening in the wizarding world sounds downright sinister. Thanks for the nice long chapter! I’m looking forward to the vignette ahead.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Severus definitely has some adjusting to do with his new role, he's a fast learner though.
| Title: Chapter 4: Harry's Story
| 31 Jul 2022 7:14 pm
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| Reviewer: A98 (Signed)
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Of course, Dumbledore wouldn't be available when he is needed! I both feel sorry for Severus but am also frustrated with him because he can't just let go of his unreasonable hatred. I love Harry's character here, he's more confident in his abilities but still as brave and righteous as he is in canon. I can't wait to explore the relationship between this universe Severus and Lily, it's so interesting, and I can see getting kinda awkward for our Severus lol Do you have any updating schedule ? I know you work on your other story too but I hope you'd give just as much love to this one because I love it
Author's Response: Thank you so much! There was a big delay in this chapter while I researched/decided how I wanted to handle magic with Harry's disability - where magic can/can't help him as well as a more solid timeline on the AU. Now that I have a better foundation in it, I'm hoping to find a schedule that can keep both stories updating together regularly. It's a bit ambitious, so I'll see how things fall. This has been a good break from my other story when I need to clear my head, and it's awesome to hear at least one other person enjoys reading it!
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